TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意控制停顿的频率，以使表达更流畅。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，并在回答中明确地阐述了文章中的计划、女士对计划的看法以及她持有这一观点的原因。为了进一步提高回答质量，建议在描述女士观点时更具体地引用听力材料中的细节。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to make change to the library's book. The university plans to make changes to the library's books.（将“change”改为复数形式“changes”，将“book”改为复数形式“books”，使句子更符合语法规则。） They want to remove some of the old books that have not been used for about five years and prepare space for the new books. They plan to remove some old books that haven't been used for about five years and create space for new books.（将“want”改为“plan”，使句子更正式；将“have not”缩写为“haven't”，使句子更自然；将“prepare”改为“create”，使句子更准确。） And the remote books will be scanned and uploaded on the school's website. Additionally, the removed books will be scanned and uploaded to the school's website.（将“remote”改为“removed”，使句子更准确；用“Additionally”替换“And”，使句子更连贯。） And the woman in the conversation thinks that's a timely change. The woman in the conversation believes this is a timely change.（用“The woman in the conversation believes”替换“And the woman in the conversation thinks”，使句子更连贯；用“this is a timely change”替换“that's a timely change”，使句子更自然。） While she is working in the library, she found that the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available. While working in the library, she noticed that the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable.（将“she is”改为“she”，使句子更简洁；将“found”改为“noticed”，使句子更自然；将“the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available”改为“the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable”，使句子更连贯。） So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed. She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed.（用“She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed”替换“So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed”，使句子更连贯。） And at the same time, the scanned books are much more easier for readers to use because students do not have to go to the library and carry the book around. Simultaneously, scanned books will be much easier for readers to use since students won't have to visit the library and carry physical books around.（用“Simultaneously”替换“And at the same time”，使句子更连贯；将“are much more easier”改为“will be much easier”，使句子更自然；将“do not have to”改为“won't have to”，使句子更简洁；用“visit the library and carry physical books around”替换“go to the library and carry the book around”，使句子更准确。） They only have to do is to stay in their room and read. All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read.（用“All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read”替换“They only have to do is to stay in their room and read”，使句子更自然。） And she thinks it will be much better if all the books can be scanned or digitalized. She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized.（用“She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized”替换“And she thinks it will be much better if

6.思维导图

- University Library Changes
  - Remove old books
    - Not used for five years
    - Create space for new books
  - Digitize removed books
    - Upload to the website
  - Woman's opinion
    - Timely change
      - Shelves crowded with old books
      - New books unavailable
    - Benefits of digitization
      - Easier access for students
      - No need to visit the library and carry physical books
    - Suggestion for improvement
      - Digitize all books

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅度，请注意在适当的地方停顿，并确保发音准确。

4.话题发展 发言者对文章中的计划进行了简要概述，并阐述了女士对计划的看法及其理由。然而，回答中存在一些组织上的问题。建议在回答时更加关注逻辑结构和连贯性，以便更清晰地传达观点。同时，可以尝试提供更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The woman thinks the measure is a practical one. The woman believes the plan is practical. (将“measure”改为“plan”，使表达更准确。)

Original: First off, she thinks that the new booths which don't go to shelves is a waste of resource. Firstly, she believes that not placing new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. (调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

Original: Because last year when she helped the library, she saw a pile of new books crowded in the office but didn't go to the shelves so the students can't get good use of them. This is because last year, when she assisted at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. (调整句子结构，使表达更连贯。)

Original: Besides, she thinks that these old books which can be accessed online offers students an easier option to look through these old books because they won't go to the library and maybe can sit in the dormitory to read these books. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with an easier option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library. (调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

Revised answer (140 words):

The woman believes the plan is practical. Firstly, she believes that not placing new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. This is because last year, when she assisted at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with an easier option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library.

6.思维导图

• Plan
  • Practical
    • New books
      • Waste of resources
      • Not on shelves
      • Students can't utilize effectively
    • Digitizing old books
      • Easier access
      • Read from dormitories
      • No need to visit the library

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微提高流利度。建议练习更自然地连接单词和短语，以提高口语的连贯性。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以避免句子之间的混乱。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释女士观点时提供更多细节。例如，在提到女士认为在线访问是个好主意时，可以进一步解释她为什么觉得这样做对学生更方便。此外，在总结时，可以更明确地指出女士对计划的看法及其原因。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the reading passage announces that the university library is going to remove the books which haven't been borrowed for about 5 years. The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years.（将 "announces" 改为 "states"，使语气更加中立；将 "is going to" 改为 "plans to"，使句子更加简洁；将 "for about 5 years" 改为 "for approximately five years"，使表达更加准确。）

And it is because it can create the space for new books, and the old books have already been scanned into digital way, and the students can easily access the books on the computer in their dormitory. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories.（将原句中的多个 "and" 删除，以提高连贯性；将 "scanned into digital way" 改为 "digitized"，使表达更加简洁。）

And in the conversation, the woman agrees with the announcement, and it is because she has already been the librarian, and she knows that it is so crowded for the piles of books stacked in the office, including new shipments of books that the university has bought. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university.（将 "announcement" 改为 "plan"，使表达更加准确；将 "it is because she has already been the librarian" 改为 "as she has experience as a librarian"，使表达更加自然。）

Secondly, she thinks it is a great idea to use online access because the students don't have to go to the library or carry the books around, and it can be easy for them to read the books. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.（将 "Secondly" 改为 "Furthermore"，使句子更加连贯；将 "it is a great idea to use online access" 改为 "utilizing online access is beneficial"，使表达更加简洁。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • University library
  • Remove books (not borrowed for ~5 years)
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitization of old books

• Conversation

  • Woman's opinion
    • Agrees with the plan
    • Reasons:
      • Experience as a librarian
      • Crowded office with stacks of books
      • Online access benefits students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。为了提高交付得分，请注意以下几点：

• 在发音时要保持一致的语速，避免过快或过慢。

• 在适当的地方暂停，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

• 注意发音准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在以下方面进行改进以提高主题发展得分：

• 在总结计划时，可以更详细地描述图书馆将如何处理被移除的书籍（例如，将它们数字化并通过图书馆网站提供）。

• 在解释女士对计划的看法时，可以更具体地说明她为什么认为这是一个好主意（例如，她认为数字化图书会让学生更容易查找和阅读资料）。

• 可以在回答中加入一些转折词或连接词（如“因此”、“然而”等），以使观点之间的联系更加明确。

5.语言使用

原文：The university will remove the books that have not been borrowed from the library. The university plans to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library.（更准确地描述计划的细节，以便听众更好地理解。）（更准确地描述计划的细节，以便听众更好地理解。）

This is because it can create more space and because these books will be digitalized. This is to create more space for new books and to digitize the removed ones.（使用更自然的语言表达原因。）（使用更自然的语言表达原因。）

The woman likes this idea. The woman supports this plan.（使用更正式的词汇来表达女士的观点。）（使用更正式的词汇来表达女士的观点。）

Firstly, she has worked in the library last year and she thinks that the books there were very crowded and the library was packed with books. First, she mentioned her experience working in the library last year, stating that it was overcrowded with books.（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）

In fact, there are piles of books in the library but they do not go on the shelf because there is not enough space for them. In fact, many books could not be placed on shelves due to limited space.（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）

Besides, the woman thinks that it is easier to check the books if they are digitalized. Moreover, she believes that digitized books would be more accessible for students.（使用更自然的语言表达观点。）（使用更自然的语言表达观点。）

In the past, they had to go to the library and carry a lot of things. Previously, students needed to visit the library and carry numerous items with them.（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）

However, they can read it in the dorm right now. However, now they can access these materials from their dormitories.（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）

As a result, she thinks that it is a great idea for the library to remove those books. Consequently, she considers the library's plan to remove and digitize these books to be highly beneficial.（使用更自然的语言表达结论。）（使用更自然的语言表达结论。）

修订版（140字）：

The university plans to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library. This is to create more space for new books and to digitize the removed ones. The woman supports this plan. First, she mentioned her experience working in the library last year, stating that it was overcrowded with books. In fact, many books could not be placed on shelves due to limited space. Moreover, she believes that digitized books would be more accessible for students. Previously, students needed to visit the library and carry numerous items with them. However, now they can access these materials from their dorm

6.思维导图

- University Library Plan
  - Remove books
    - Not borrowed in past 5 years
  - Create space
    - For new books
  - Digitize removed books
    - Accessible online

- Woman's Opinion
  - Supports the plan
    - Overcrowded library experience
      - Limited shelf space
    - Digitized books benefits
      - More accessible for students
      - Convenient access from dormitories

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any potential spelling errors.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to further support their points. To improve topic development, the speaker should consider elaborating on the benefits of digitizing books and how it would impact students' access to resources.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The reading passage announces a change on campus. However, the books which haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library bookshelf. The reading passage announces a change on campus: books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. (Removed "However" and combined sentences for a smoother flow) Also, these books will be scanned into electronic books. Additionally, these books will be digitized. (Rephrased for clarity and conciseness) The woman in the conversation is in favor of this idea. She starts off by saying that she is also a librarian who works here. She had already found out that a lot of books which have been borrowed is very old and it's a shame that there's no place for other new books to come into the library. She thinks that it's a good idea to scan these books electronic because people don't need to go to libraries and just read these books in their classroom and houses. She believes that digitizing these books is beneficial as it allows people to access them without visiting the library, enabling them to read from their classrooms or homes. (Rephrased for clarity and improved sentence structure) She also suggests that it's a good idea to scan all these books into electronic. Furthermore, she suggests digitizing all the books in the library. (Rephrased for conciseness and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage announces a change on campus: books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. Additionally, these books will be digitized. The woman in the conversation is in favor of this idea. She starts off by saying that she is also a librarian who works there. She had already found out that many of the borrowed books are very old, and it's a shame that there's no space for new books to be added to the library. She believes that digitizing these books is beneficial as it allows people to access them without visiting the library, enabling them to read from their classrooms or homes. Furthermore, she suggests digitizing all the books in the library.

6. Mind Map

- Change on campus
  - Removal of infrequently borrowed books
  - Digitization of removed books

- Woman's opinion
  - In favor of the idea
  - Reasons:
    - Librarian perspective
    - Old books taking up space
    - Accessibility without visiting the library
    - Reading from classrooms or homes
  - Suggestion:
    - Digitize all library books

7. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语速较为稳定，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性，请注意在适当的地方停顿，避免在句子中间出现不自然的停顿。此外，请注意准确发音，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者基本上概述了文章中的计划，并表达了女性对该计划的看法及其理由。但是，可以进一步完善回答的组织结构和连贯性。建议在回答时更清晰地阐述计划、观点和理由之间的关系，并尝试使用更多的连接词来增强回答的连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original: The announcement Mary talks about that the unborrowed book in the past five years will be removed to the shelves in order to set place for new books and the old books will be digitalized. The woman in the conversation totally agreed with this decision. Firstly, she said that she has worked in the library and there was always crowds in the shelves which made many students to complain. The new books were stacked in the office and no room for them to place. So the unborrowed books to the shelves is a reasonable matter. Secondly, the woman said that it's more easier for students to use the books rather than in the library they can use them in the dormitory. She suggested that all the books should be digitalized.

Corrected: The announcement Mary talks about states that the unborrowed book books not borrowed in the past five years will be removed to from the shelves in order to set place make space for new books and the old books will be digitalized digitized. The woman in the conversation totally agreed with this decision. Firstly, she said that she has worked in the library and there was always crowds crowding in the shelves which made many students to complaincomplain. The new books were stacked in the office and no room for them to place. So the unborrowed books to the shelves removing unborrored books from the shelves is a reasonable matter. Secondly, the woman said that it's more easier easier for students to use the books rather than in the library they can use them in the dormitory. She suggested that all the books should be digitalized digitized.

(将“Mary talks about”改为“states”，因为这样更自然。将“the unborrowed book”改为“books not borrowed”，以使句子更清晰。将“to”改为“from”，以表示书籍从书架上被移除。将“set place”改为“make space”，以使表达更准确。将“digitalized”改为“digitized”，因为这是正确的术语。将“crowds”改为“crowding”，以使句子更自然。删除“to complain”中的“to”，因为这是不必要的。将“the unborrowed books to the shelves”改为“removing unborrored books from the shelves”，以使句子更清晰。将“more easier”改为“easier”，因为这是正确的表达方式。)

Revised (140 words): The announcement states that books not borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the shelves in order to make space for new books, and the old books will be digitized. The woman in the conversation completely agrees with this decision. First, she mentioned that she has worked in the library and there was always crowding in the shelves, which made many students complain. The new books were stacked in the office with no room for them to be placed. Therefore, removing unborrored books from the shelves is a reasonable solution. Second, the woman said that it's easier for students to use the books in their dormitory rather than in the library. She suggested that all the books should be digitized to improve accessibility and convenience for students.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - Books not borrowed in 5 years
  - Removed from shelves
  - Make space for new books
  - Digitized

- Woman's opinion
  - Completely agrees
  - Reasons
    - Crowding in shelves
      - Students complain
    - Easier access in dormitory
      - Suggestion: digitize all books

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达的角度来看，这个回答的语言流畅度和连贯性较好，但仍有一些不太自然的停顿。建议练习更自然地连接句子，以提高语言的流畅性。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以进一步完善。建议在总结计划时更简洁明了，并在解释女士观点时提供更多细节。此外，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加紧密和有条理。

5.语言使用

Original: Essentially, the university plans to remove the infrequent borrowed books from shelves because it can create more spaces for new books, and the removed books will be digitalized and uploaded online. Essentially, the university plans to remove infrequently borrowed books from shelves to create more space for new books, and the removed books will be digitized and uploaded online. (基本上，大学计划将不常借阅的书从书架上移除，以便为新书创造更多空间，并将移除的书籍数字化并上传至网上。)

Original: The women in the conversation agrees with the proposal for two reasons. The woman in the conversation agrees with the proposal for two reasons. (对话中的女士因为两个原因同意这个提议。)

Original: The first reason is that the shelves in the library is crowded. The first reason is that the library shelves are crowded. (第一个原因是图书馆的书架很拥挤。)

Original: There are piles of new books bought in the office, but the library shelves don't have enough room for them, which is a pity. There are piles of new books purchased, but there isn't enough room on the library shelves for them, which is unfortunate. (有很多新书被购买，但图书馆的书架上没有足够的空间放置它们，这是很遗憾的。)

Original: The second reason is that it is more convenient for students to access removed books online. The second reason is that it is more convenient for students to access the removed books online. (第二个原因是学生在线访问已移除的书籍更方便。)

Original: They can just sit in their dormitory and read those books. They can simply read those books from their dormitories. (他们可以在宿舍里轻松阅读这些书。)

Original: The women also want all the books to be digitalized and accessed online, which makes it easier for students to use. The woman also wants all the books to be digitized and accessed online, making it easier for students to use them. (女士还希望所有的书都能被数字化并在线访问，这样学生使用起来更容易。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Essentially, the university plans to remove infrequently borrowed books from shelves to create more space for new books, and the removed books will be digitized and uploaded online. The woman in the conversation agrees with the proposal for two reasons. The first reason is that the library shelves are crowded. There are piles of new books purchased, but there isn't enough room on the library shelves for them, which is unfortunate. The second reason is that it is more convenient for students to access the removed books online. They can simply read those books from their dormitories. The woman also wants all the books to be digitized and accessed online, making it easier for students to use them.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
    - Remove infrequently borrowed books
    - Create space for new books
    - Digitize and upload removed books online

- Woman's Opinion
    - Agrees with the proposal
        - Reason 1: Library shelves are crowded
            - Piles of new books purchased
            - Insufficient room on shelves
        - Reason 2: More convenient for students to access removed books online
            - Read from dormitories
    - Wants all books to be digitized and accessed online for easier use by students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，发言者需要注意正确的发音和适当的停顿。例如，在 "digitalized" 和 "dormitory" 这两个词中，发音需要改进。此外，尝试减少不必要的重复词汇，如 "other books"。建议多加练习，提高发音准确性和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with a clear summary of the plan and the woman's opinion. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific examples or details to support the reasons given for her opinion. For example, mentioning how digitizing books can save space and make it easier for students to find the books they need would strengthen the response. Additionally, try to avoid repetition of phrases like "other books" and use synonyms or rephrase the sentences to make the response more engaging. Overall, focus on enhancing the clarity and depth of your explanations to improve topic development.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Xiao's reading talk about a coming change of libraries' books that are gonna be digitalized and scanned as a digital version for the students as it is not used frequently. The reading passage discusses an upcoming change in the university library, where infrequently used books will be digitized and made available online for students. (将句子重新组织，使其更自然且准确。)

And the girl in the listening material strongly agreed with this idea. The woman in the listening passage expresses her strong agreement with this plan. (用更正式的词汇替换“girl”。)

Firstly, she worked at the library last year and she found that the shelf was pretty crowded and it's full of other books. First, she mentions her experience working at the library last year, where she observed that the shelves were overcrowded with various books. (简化句子结构，提高准确性。)

So although there are new books in the office, they can't put them on the shelf as it's full of other books and the students are not able to read them. As a result, new books cannot be placed on the shelves due to limited space, making them inaccessible to students. (重新组织句子，使其更清晰。)

And the second reason is that she thinks the way of scanning these books and putting it online will help students to easily read these books, like you don't have to go to the library or carry these heavy books. The second reason is that she believes digitizing the books and making them available online will facilitate easier access for students, eliminating the need to visit the library or carry heavy books. (简化句子结构，提高准确性。)

You can also read it at your dormitory or anywhere else. Students can read them in their dormitories or any other location. (使用更正式的词汇。)

So it will be easier for them to get access to these books and she thinks it is a better way to put all of the books like this way. Thus, this method will make accessing these books more convenient, and she considers it a superior approach for managing the library's collection. (简化句子结构，提高准确性。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage discusses an upcoming change in the university library, where infrequently used books will be digitized and made available online for students. The woman in the listening passage expresses her strong agreement with this plan. First, she mentions her experience working at the library last year, where she observed that the shelves were overcrowded with various books. As a result, new books cannot be placed on the shelves due to limited space, making them inaccessible to students. The second reason is that she believes digitizing the books and making them available online will facilitate easier access for students, eliminating the need to visit the library or carry heavy books. Students can read them in their dormitories or any other location. Thus, this method will make accessing these books more convenient, and she considers it a superior approach for managing the library's collection.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Upcoming change
  - University library
  - Digitizing infrequently used books

- Listening Passage
  - Woman's opinion
    - Strong agreement
    - Reasons:
      1. Overcrowded shelves
      2. Easier access for students
        - No need to visit the library
        - No need to carry heavy books
        - Accessible from any location

7.关键词