TOEFL TPO 47 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state the woman's opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高发音准确性，请注意在练习发音时多关注元音和辅音的发音。同时，尝试在练习时减少不必要的停顿，以使语言更流畅。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在一些地方进行改进。首先，在总结建议时，请确保更明确地指出建议的来源（即信件）。此外，在解释女士反对意见的原因时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词（例如“因此”、“然而”等），以使回答更具连贯性。最后，在提供女士观点的理由时，可以考虑给出更具体的例子或详细信息，以使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The student proposed that the university should publish the evaluation online for everyone because it can motivate the professors to improve the teaching styles and it can help the students in the future to choose the classes. The student suggested that the university publish evaluations online for everyone, as this would motivate professors to enhance their teaching methods and assist future students in selecting classes. (将原句中的"it can"改为"this would"，使句子更自然。同时，将"teaching styles"改为"teaching methods"，使表达更准确。)

Well, in the listening, the woman disagreed with it because it won't help to improve the teaching styles because the professors won't be happy to see their styles are criticized published so they won't read the letter and be influenced by this. In the listening, the woman disagreed, arguing that it wouldn't improve teaching methods since professors would be unhappy with public criticism and might not read or be influenced by these evaluations. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

What's more, it won't help the student in the future to choose the classes because the students won't write something helpful or specific because they always write this in the last day of the class. Moreover, it wouldn't help future students choose classes, as current students might not provide helpful or specific feedback due to writing evaluations on the last day of class. (使用“Moreover”替换“What's more”，使连接词更自然。同时，简化句子结构。)

They all want to live in a hurry. They are all eager to leave quickly. (将原句中的"live in a hurry"改为"leave quickly"，使表达更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The student suggested that the university publish evaluations online for everyone, as this would motivate professors to enhance their teaching methods and assist future students in selecting classes. In the listening, the woman disagreed, arguing that it wouldn't improve teaching methods since professors would be unhappy with public criticism and might not read or be influenced by these evaluations. Moreover, it wouldn't help future students choose classes, as current students might not provide helpful or specific feedback due to writing evaluations on the last day of class. They are all eager to leave quickly.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student's proposal
  - Woman's disagreement

- Motivation for professors
  - Unhappy with public criticism
  - Might not read or be influenced by evaluations

- Help for future students
  - Current students' feedback
    - Not helpful or specific
    - Written on the last day of class
  - Eager to leave quickly

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

22. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。建议发言者注意在句子之间保持连贯性，避免不必要的停顿。此外，发言者需要注意正确发音单词，以免产生拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于信件中的提议进行了总结，并提到了女生的观点及其原因。但在表述原因时，部分内容表达不够清晰。建议发言者在解释女生观点的原因时，更加详细地阐述其观点，并确保内容组织得更加有条理。

5.语言使用

Original: The letter noticed that the university may make the professor's evaluations because it can motivate the professor to improve their teaching style and in addition, the prospective students can read and make more informed decision about the class they want to take. The students in the conversation disagreed with this proposal. First, she thinks the professor likes to have a criticized style for teaching. If they read this evaluation online, the results may have negative criticism to the professors. Some students write down this evaluation which are hurry to leave the university so the result will not be specific helpful for the professor's work.

Corrected: The letter noticedmentioned(提到，更自然的表达) that the university may makepublish(发布，更准确的词汇) the professor's evaluations because it can motivate the professors to improve their teaching stylemethods(方法，更专业的词汇) and, in addition, prospective students can read and make more informed decisiondecisions(决定，应使用复数形式) about the classes they want to take. The students in the conversation disagreed with this proposal. First, she thinks the professor likes to have a criticized style for teachingprofessors wouldn't appreciate public criticism of their teaching styles(教授不会喜欢公开批评他们的教学风格，更清晰的表达). If they read these evaluations online, the results may have negative criticism totowards(对于，更自然的表达) the professors. Some students write down these evaluations which are hurry to leavein a hurry to leave(匆忙离开，语法更准确) the university, so the results will not be specific helpfulspecifically helpful(具体有帮助，更自然的表达) for the professors' work.

Revised (140 words): The letter mentioned that the university may publish the professors' evaluations because it can motivate them to improve their teaching methods and, in addition, prospective students can read and make more informed decisions about the classes they want to take. The students in the conversation disagreed with this proposal. First, she thinks professors wouldn't appreciate public criticism of their teaching styles. If they read these evaluations online, the results may have negative criticism towards the professors. Some students write down these evaluations in a hurry to leave the university, so the results will not be specifically helpful for the professors' work. By addressing these language use issues, this revised answer demonstrates advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, a natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and a strong conclusion, which would help achieve a score of 30.

6.思维导图

- Letter
  - Publish professors' evaluations
  - Motivate teaching improvement
  - Informed decisions for students

- Conversation
  - Disagreement with proposal
    - Professors' perspective
      - Public criticism
      - Negative impact
    - Students' perspective
      - Rushed evaluations
      - Lack of helpful information

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方需要改进。建议在练习时关注正确的发音和语调，以便更自然地表达。此外，尝试保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步改进。在总结提案时，请确保更详细地解释其原因和目的。同时，在解释女士的观点时，请提供更多具体细节和例子来支持她的观点。这将使回答更加完整和有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The student proposed that the university should publish the evaluation online for everyone because it can motivate the professor to improve the teaching and it can help the student in the future to choose the classes. The student proposed that the university should publish evaluations online for everyone, as this could motivate professors to improve their teaching and help future students choose their classes.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

However, in the listening, the woman disagreed with it. However, in the listening passage, the woman disagreed with this proposal.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）

First of all, the professor won't be too happy to see that their teaching styles are published, criticized online, so they won't read the letters. First of all, professors might not be pleased to see their teaching styles published and criticized online, so they may not read the evaluations.（改进了句子结构、词汇和语法。）

That may be negative and it won't be influence their teaching styles. This could have a negative impact and not influence their teaching styles.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）

What's more, the student won't write something helpful or specific because they always write the letter in the last day of the class. Furthermore, students might not write helpful or specific comments because they usually complete evaluations on the last day of class.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）

They all want to live in a hurry, so they won't see it very carefully. They are often in a hurry to leave, so they may not give it much thought.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）

修订版（140字）：

The student proposed that the university should publish evaluations online for everyone, as this could motivate professors to improve their teaching and help future students choose their classes. However, in the listening passage, the woman disagreed with this proposal. First of all, professors might not be pleased to see their teaching styles published and criticized online, so they may not read the evaluations. This could have a negative impact and not influence their teaching styles. Furthermore, students might not write helpful or specific comments because they usually complete evaluations on the last day of class. They are often in a hurry to leave, so they may not give it much thought.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Publish evaluations online
  • Motivate professors
  • Help future students

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal
  • Reasons:
    • Professors' displeasure
      • Teaching styles criticized
      • May not read evaluations
    • Students' evaluations
      • Last day of class
      • Not helpful or specific

7.关键词