TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal described in the letter, Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state hy opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确导致了拼写错误。此外，适当的停顿也很重要，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。建议多练习发音和语速控制，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题要求的方面，但在组织结构上还有待加强。可以尝试使用更清晰的连接词，如首先、其次等来组织你的观点。同时，在解释原因时要确保提供足够的支持或例子。多加练习，相信你会在话题发展方面取得更好的成绩。

5.语言使用

Original: In the latter, students propose that combined students and faculty dining should be done. In the letter, it is proposed that student and faculty dining areas should be combined. (将“latter”改为“letter”，调整句子结构使其更自然)

Original: First is there will be more space for students to eat, and second, it may encourage students have a positive social. Firstly, it will provide more space for students to eat, and secondly, it may encourage positive social interactions among students. (使用“firstly”和“secondly”进行逻辑排序，调整句子结构)

Original: However, and in the conversation, the woman totally agrees with this latter. However, in the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this proposal. (去掉不必要的“and”，将“latter”改为“proposal”)

Original: First, she thinks that the professor have already have place to choose more than students, First, she believes that professors already have more dining options than students, (调整句子结构，使用“believes”代替“thinks”，将“have already have place to choose”改为“already have more dining options”)

Original: and students have no space for eating, and it may not for using space. and students lack space for eating, which is not an efficient use of space. (调整句子结构，使表达更清晰)

Original: And in addition, but the woman thinks for the Additionally, the woman considers that (去掉不必要的“but”，使用“Additionally”进行衔接，调整句子结构)

Revised (140 words):

In the letter, it is proposed that student and faculty dining areas should be combined. Firstly, it will provide more space for students to eat, and secondly, it may encourage positive social interactions among students. However, in the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this proposal. First, she believes that professors already have more dining options than students, and students lack space for eating, which is not an efficient use of space. Additionally, the woman considers that

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Combine student and faculty dining areas
    - Benefits
      - More space for students to eat
      - Encourage positive social interactions

- Conversation
  - Woman's opinion
    - Agrees with the proposal
      - Reasons
        - Professors have more dining options than students
        - Inefficient use of space for students

7.关键词