TOEFL TPO 9 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the university's new policy. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，这个回答的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但偶尔会有一些停顿。为了提高发音的准确性，建议在练习时多关注发音和语调。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement. The speaker could have elaborated more on the woman's personal experience with her brother's internship and how it relates to the lack of meaningful tasks during the work experience. Additionally, providing more specific examples of the competition among students from other universities would have strengthened the argument against the new policy. Overall, focusing on expanding ideas and providing more concrete examples will help improve topic development in future responses.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the announcement, the university is planning to require the students to enroll in a program to have a one semester off work in a local company. According to the announcement, the university plans to require students to complete one semester of work experience in a local company. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然)

However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan. However, the woman in the conversation opposes this plan. (使用了更高级的词汇“opposes”替换“disagrees”)

In the first place, she believes that it will not enhance the students' leadership or organizational skills, because the students will only be responsible for some basic work in the company during the internship, and they are not meaningful for the leadership or the organizational skills. Firstly, she argues that it will not develop students' leadership or organizational skills since they will only handle basic tasks during their internships, which are not significant for cultivating these skills. (改进了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式)

Secondly, she believes that the relationship between the company will not help them secure permanent employment, because there are many other students from other universities to do the same job in that corporation, and there are no sufficient positions for so many students. Secondly, she contends that the connections established with the company will not guarantee permanent employment, as numerous students from other universities compete for the same positions, resulting in an insufficient number of available jobs. (改进了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the announcement, the university plans to require students to complete one semester of work experience in a local company. However, the woman in the conversation opposes this plan. Firstly, she argues that it will not develop students' leadership or organizational skills since they will only handle basic tasks during their internships, which are not significant for cultivating these skills. She cites her brother's experience as an example of how internships often involve menial tasks rather than meaningful learning opportunities. Secondly, she contends that the connections established with the company will not guarantee permanent employment, as numerous students from other universities compete for the same positions, resulting in an insufficient number of available jobs. She emphasizes that this fierce competition among graduates makes securing a full-time position extremely challenging.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • University's plan
  • One semester of work experience

• Woman's opinion

  • Opposes the plan
  • Reasons
    • Leadership and organizational skills
      • Basic tasks during internships
      • Not significant for skill development
    • Permanent employment
      • Competition from other universities
      • Insufficient job positions

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整。例如，可以尝试减少不必要的停顿，以保持语速的一致性。此外，在发音方面也需要注意一些单词的准确度。建议多加练习，提高发音的准确性和流利度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上涵盖了女生提到的观点和理由。然而，在组织结构上还有改进的空间。可以尝试更清晰地将女生的观点和理由分开，并使用恰当的连接词使回答更加连贯。同时，可以考虑在举例时提供更具体的细节，以增强论据的说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the woman disagrees with the university's new policy based on the following reasons. The woman disagrees with the university's new policy for several reasons. (简化句子结构，使其更自然) First of all, she doesn't think that the work experience may help students develop leadership or organizational skills because the work students do is mainly basic tasks like typing or filling stuff, and these are not very meaningful. Firstly, she believes that the work experience might not help students develop leadership or organizational skills, as they mainly perform basic tasks like typing or filing documents, which are not very meaningful. (改进句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，修正拼写错误) Students may not be able to learn anything new from it. Thus, students might not learn anything new from such experiences. (使句子更自然流畅) And also, she doesn't think that students can benefit from building relationships with company and guarantee themselves permanent employment because lots of other students from other universities are also required to take these tasks and the competition students may face after their graduation may also be fierce because the job vacancies will not be enough until then. Additionally, she doubts that building relationships with companies can guarantee permanent employment for students, as many other universities have similar requirements, leading to fierce competition among graduates due to limited job vacancies. (改进句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，使句子更连贯)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman disagrees with the university's new policy for several reasons. Firstly, she believes that the work experience might not help students develop leadership or organizational skills, as they mainly perform basic tasks like typing or filing documents, which are not very meaningful. Thus, students might not learn anything new from such experiences. Additionally, she doubts that building relationships with companies can guarantee permanent employment for students, as many other universities have similar requirements, leading to fierce competition among graduates due to limited job vacancies.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Reasons
    - Limited skill development
      - Basic tasks
      - Lack of meaningful work
    - Employment prospects
      - Building relationships
      - Competition among graduates
      - Limited job vacancies

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with pronunciation and word choice that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on practicing pronunciation and enunciation to ensure that all words are clearly understood. Additionally, working on varying sentence structure and using more natural transitions between ideas can help create a smoother flow in the response.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, addressing the woman's opinion and her reasons for holding that opinion. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific examples or elaborating on the points made. To strengthen topic development, the speaker should consider expanding on the reasons given by the woman, such as discussing how the competition among students might affect their job prospects or providing more context about her brother's experience in a local company. This will help create a more comprehensive and persuasive response.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: The university's new policy suggests that it could be a good chance for students to participate in a local business, and for two reasons. The university's new policy presents an opportunity for students to gain experience in local businesses due to two reasons. (Rephrased for clarity and natural flow) First, they think to develop their working skills, organizational skills, leadership, as well as provide better job opportunities in the future. First, the policy aims to develop students' work, organizational, and leadership skills while providing better job opportunities in the future. (Improved sentence structure and word choice) The woman disagrees because first of all, she thinks that the job wouldn't help develop their organizational skills nor any skills because, and she gave an example of her brother working in a local company by just doing some simple typing and filing exercises, that is not useful at all. The woman disagrees because she believes that such jobs would not help develop any significant skills. She cites her brother's experience in a local company where he only performed basic tasks like typing and filing, which were not useful. (Rephrased for clarity and natural flow) Second of all, she disagrees that because of the competition consists of too many students in the community, the job, and there's only limited job positions, the competition would be fierce and the job is simply not enough to fulfill anyone's need. Secondly, she disagrees with the notion that these jobs would provide better opportunities, as the competition among students in the community is fierce due to limited job positions, making it difficult to fulfill everyone's needs. (Improved sentence structure and word choice)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university's new policy presents an opportunity for students to gain experience in local businesses due to two reasons. First, the policy aims to develop students' work, organizational, and leadership skills while providing better job opportunities in the future. The woman disagrees because she believes that such jobs would not help develop any significant skills. She cites her brother's experience in a local company where he only performed basic tasks like typing and filing, which were not useful. Secondly, she disagrees with the notion that these jobs would provide better opportunities, as the competition among students in the community is fierce due to limited job positions, making it difficult to fulfill everyone's needs.

6.Mind Map

- University's new policy
  - Opportunity for students
    - Gain experience in local businesses
    - Develop skills
      - Work skills
      - Organizational skills
      - Leadership skills
    - Provide better job opportunities

- Woman's disagreement
  - Jobs not helpful for skill development
    - Brother's experience (example)
      - Basic tasks (typing, filing)
  - Competition among students
    - Limited job positions
    - Difficulty fulfilling everyone's needs

7.Key Words

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 2

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 2

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 19

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery could be improved by focusing on clearer and more fluid speech. There are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow of the response, and some pronunciation issues that lead to spelling errors. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and work on accurate pronunciation.

4. Topic Development The topic development in the response is generally coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details from the listening passage to support the woman's opinion. Additionally, the speaker should work on paraphrasing the content from both the reading and listening passages more effectively to demonstrate a better understanding of the material.

5. Language Use

Original: The school will make a plan to every student to join a one-semester program to study to practice in a company, The university will require each student to participate in a one-semester work experience program at a company, (clarified the subject and rephrased for better sentence structure) because this can enhance their abilities such as leadership and management skills, and it can also enhance their employment rate. as it aims to improve their leadership and organizational skills, as well as increase their chances of employment. (rephrased for clarity and proper vocabulary) But the girls the woman (corrected the subject) disagree with the ideas for several reasons. with this policy due to a couple of reasons. (improved sentence structure and word choice) First, they think in the company they cannot enhance their management skills because they will just do basic jobs there, they will just waste their time, will not practice their skills. And second, this cannot secure their employment because many students are here and the competition is very high. So these women think this is not good.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university will require each student to participate in a one-semester work experience program at a company, as it aims to improve their leadership and organizational skills, as well as increase their chances of employment. However, the woman disagrees with this policy due to a couple of reasons. Firstly, she believes that students will not be able to enhance their management skills during the work experience, as they will likely be assigned basic tasks and not have the opportunity to practice their skills. Secondly, she argues that this policy cannot guarantee employment for students upon graduation, as there are many other universities with similar requirements, leading to a highly competitive job market. Therefore, the woman thinks that this new policy is not beneficial for students.

6. Mind Map

- University Requirement
  - One-semester work experience program
  - Aim: Improve leadership and organizational skills, increase employment chances

- Woman's Disagreement
  - Reason 1: Limited skill enhancement
    - Basic tasks assigned
    - No opportunity to practice skills

  - Reason 2: No guaranteed employment
    - Many universities with similar requirements
    - Highly competitive job market

- Conclusion
  - Woman believes policy is not beneficial for students

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 主题发展（Topic Development）：3

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在解释女生观点的理由时，可以更详细地说明为什么这些原因会导致她对政策持有负面看法。例如，在谈到学生在实习期间只做基本工作时，可以进一步解释这种情况如何影响他们未来的职业发展。此外，在谈到毕业后就业竞争激烈时，可以提供更多具体例子来支持观点。总之，在练习时注意提供更充分的支持和例证来增强论点。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to require students to have a one-year work experience in a local or small business company, The university plans to require students to complete one semester of work experience in a local corporation or small business, (修改为与原文一致的描述) and the woman thinks this is not going to help students. and the woman disagrees, believing it won't actually help students. (使语言更自然) First of all, the student won't develop better leadership or organizational skills since they're just doing a basic job in those companies, such as typing or measure the files. Firstly, she argues that students won't develop leadership or organizational skills because they will only perform basic tasks in these companies, such as typing or filing documents. (改进句子结构和词汇) They won't learn anything new. Thus, they won't acquire any new skills. (使语言更自然)

And also, it won't help students to find a permanent job after graduation because there are a lot of students in other universities who have the same requirements. Additionally, she believes it won't assist students in securing permanent employment after graduation due to numerous students from other universities having the same requirement. (改进句子结构和词汇) So there are a lot more students in the same positions, which will make it difficult to find a permanent job in the same positions after graduation. Consequently, the competition for permanent jobs will be intense, making it challenging for graduates to secure positions. (使语言更自然，简化句子结构)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to require students to complete one semester of work experience in a local corporation or small business, and the woman disagrees, believing it won't actually help students. Firstly, she argues that students won't develop leadership or organizational skills because they will only perform basic tasks in these companies, such as typing or filing documents. Thus, they won't acquire any new skills. Additionally, she believes it won't assist students in securing permanent employment after graduation due to numerous students from other universities having the same requirement. Consequently, the competition for permanent jobs will be intense, making it challenging for graduates to secure positions. Overall, the woman's opinion is based on her belief that the work experience requirement will not provide valuable skills or improve job prospects for business studies students at State University.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - University requirement
  - Woman's disagreement

- Reason 1
  - Lack of leadership and organizational skills development
  - Basic tasks (typing, filing)
  - No new skills acquired

- Reason 2
  - Difficulty in securing permanent employment
  - Competition from other universities' students
  - Intense competition for jobs

- Conclusion
  - Woman's opinion based on lack of valuable skills and job prospects

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔有停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意以下几点：1)在适当的地方停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点；2)注意发音准确性，避免拼写错误。通过练习和纠正这些问题，你的表达能力将得到提高。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement. To enhance the response, the speaker could consider elaborating more on the woman's personal experience with her brother's work and how it relates to the policy. Additionally, providing more specific examples or statistics about the job market competition among graduates would strengthen the argument against the policy. By expanding on these points, the response will be more persuasive and well-developed.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman disagrees with the university's new policy. First off, she points out that the leadership and organization staff are not included in the kind of work that students are going to do. Her brother has work of that kind, and it's just simple tasks like typing and filing stuff, so basically students cannot learn anything new from them. Besides, she don't think that this will help the students to gain permanent employment with those companies, since other universities in that region also has the same requirement for their students. Therefore, a lot of students are working in the companies, and once after the graduation, the competition will be impossible, since there are simply not enough jobs available in the area for all the graduates. Therefore, based on these two reasons, the woman thinks that the requirement is quite useless and disagrees with it.

Corrected Answer: The woman disagrees with the university's new policy. Firstly, she points out that leadership and organizational skills are not part of the work students will be doing. Her brother has had a job of that nature, and it involves only simple tasks like typing and filing documents; thus, students cannot learn anything new from such work. Moreover, she doesn't believe this experience will help students secure permanent employment with those companies because other universities in the region have similar requirements for their students. Consequently, many students work at these companies, and upon graduation, competition for jobs will be fierce due to a limited number of positions available for all graduates. Therefore, based on these reasons, the woman considers the requirement ineffective and disagrees with it. (首先，将"First off"改为"Firstly"，使语言更加正式。将"organization staff"改为"organizational skills"以更准确地表达观点。将"has work"改为"has had a job"以更自然地描述兄弟的经历。将"stuff"改为"documents"以提高词汇水平。将"she don't think"改为"she doesn't believe"以修正语法错误。将"also has the same requirement"改为"have similar requirements"以修正语法错误并提高词汇水平。将"a lot of students are working in the companies, and once after the graduation, the competition will be impossible,"改为"many students work at these companies, and upon graduation, competition for jobs will be fierce,"以提高词汇水平并使句子更流畅。最后，将"quite useless"改为"ineffective"以提高词汇水平。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the university's new policy. Firstly, she points out that leadership and organizational skills are not part of the work students will be doing. Her brother has had a job of that nature, and it involves only simple tasks like typing and filing documents; thus, students cannot learn anything new from such work. Moreover, she doesn't believe this experience will help students secure permanent employment with those companies because other universities in the region have similar requirements for their students. Consequently, many students work at these companies, and upon graduation, competition for jobs will be fierce due to a limited number of positions available for all graduates. Therefore, based on these reasons, the woman considers the requirement ineffective and disagrees with it.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement with policy
  - Leadership and organizational skills
    - Not part of work
    - Brother's experience
      - Simple tasks (typing, filing)
  - Permanent employment
    - Other universities' requirements
    - Competition for jobs
      - Limited positions available
  - Conclusion
    - Requirement ineffective

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答整体上较为清晰，但在某些地方存在不太自然的停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持流畅且连贯。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论述方面还有待加强。建议在练习时尝试使用更清晰的逻辑结构来组织回答，并提供更充分的支持或例证来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The university decided to require one semester of work experience at local corporation or small business to foster organizational skill and leadership. The university has decided to require one semester of work experience at a local corporation or small business to develop organizational and leadership skills.（将decided改为has decided，使时态更自然；在local corporation前加a，使语法更准确；将skill改为skills，使语法更准确）

And by doing so, they think that it will enable students to sustain a permanent employment. By doing so, they believe it will help students secure permanent employment.（将enable改为help，使表达更自然；将sustain改为secure，使词汇更准确）

The UMI is opposed to the plan because first of all, the job only requires to do some basic tasks like typing, so it cannot help students to foster leadership or organizational skill. The woman disagrees with the plan because, firstly, the job only involves performing basic tasks like typing, which cannot help students develop leadership or organizational skills.（将UMI改为woman，使表达更清晰；将requires改为involves，使词汇更准确；将foster改为develop，使词汇更准确）

And secondly, there are many other universities around that require the same work experience, so there will be a lot of graduates to compete with each other, so they cannot maintain a permanent employment role. Secondly, there are many other universities nearby with the same work experience requirement, resulting in a large number of graduates competing for jobs, making it difficult for them to secure permanent employment.（将around改为nearby，使词汇更准确；将maintain改为secure，使词汇更准确；重新组织句子结构，使表达更自然）

修订后的回答（140词）：

The university has decided to require one semester of work experience at a local corporation or small business to develop organizational and leadership skills. By doing so, they believe it will help students secure permanent employment. The woman disagrees with the plan because, firstly, the job only involves performing basic tasks like typing, which cannot help students develop leadership or organizational skills. Secondly, there are many other universities nearby with the same work experience requirement, resulting in a large number of graduates competing for jobs, making it difficult for them to secure permanent employment.

6.思维导图

• University's decision

  • One semester of work experience
  • Develop organizational and leadership skills

• Woman's disagreement

  • Basic tasks (e.g., typing)
  • No skill development

• Competition for jobs

  • Many universities with the same requirement
  • Difficulty securing permanent employment

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，说话者的语言流利，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，可能需要注意适当的停顿以提高语言的清晰度。此外，尽管发音问题可能导致拼写错误，但还是需要注意准确发音以避免误解。建议多加练习，提高发音准确性和语言流畅度。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific examples or details to support the woman's opinion. For instance, mentioning the brother's experience could be expanded upon to give a clearer picture of the tasks involved in such work experiences. Additionally, discussing the competition among graduates from other universities could be further elaborated to emphasize the difficulty in securing permanent employment. Overall, the response could benefit from more in-depth analysis and support for the woman's opinion.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the woman doesn't agree with this university's new policy. The woman disagrees with the university's new policy. (这里的表达可以更简洁。) First off, she argues that the leadership and organization stuff will not be included in the kind of work that students are going to do. Firstly, she contends that students will not gain leadership and organizational skills from the work they will be doing. (这里的表达可以更清晰。) Her brother has just that kind of a job and it really just includes simple tasks like typing and filing stuff, so basically students cannot learn anything new from this kind of jobs. Her brother has a similar job, which only involves basic tasks such as typing and filing, so students will not learn anything new from these types of jobs. (这里的表达可以更准确。) Besides, she also thinks that this will not help much for the permanent employment with those companies since other universities in the same region require the same so that a lot of students are in those positions and once after graduation the competition would be impossible. Additionally, she believes this experience will not significantly contribute to securing permanent employment at these companies because many other universities in the region have similar requirements, resulting in intense competition among graduates. (这里的表达可以更连贯。) It is not enough to be available in the area for all the graduates, so basically she thinks that this requirement is very useless. There are not enough job opportunities for all the graduates, so she considers this requirement to be ineffective. (这里的表达可以更恰当。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the university's new policy. Firstly, she contends that students will not gain leadership and organizational skills from the work they will be doing. Her brother has a similar job, which only involves basic tasks such as typing and filing, so students will not learn anything new from these types of jobs. Additionally, she believes this experience will not significantly contribute to securing permanent employment at these companies because many other universities in the region have similar requirements, resulting in intense competition among graduates. There are not enough job opportunities for all the graduates, so she considers this requirement to be ineffective. By providing more specific examples and elaborating on the competition among graduates from other universities, the response could achieve a higher score in language use and topic development.

6.思维导图

• Disagreement

  • University's new policy

• Leadership and organizational skills

  • Lack of development
  • Brother's experience

• Permanent employment

  • Intense competition
  • Other universities' requirements

• Ineffectiveness of the requirement

  • Limited job opportunities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整。例如，可以改进一些句子的结构，使其更加流畅。此外，在发音方面也需要注意一些单词的准确度。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是符合要求的。他们阐述了女士对新政策的看法，并解释了她持有这种观点的原因。然而，在提供支持或例子时可以更具体一些。例如，在谈到女士兄长的工作经历时，可以详细描述他在公司所做的工作以及他从中学到了什么。此外，在论述竞争激烈的问题时，可以给出更多具体数据或事实来支持观点。总之，建议在回答中提供更多详细信息和例子来丰富话题发展。

5.语言使用

原文：There is a new university policy that all of the students are asked to do the work experience so that they will develop their leadership and organized skills from this and it can be possible for them to be employed. The new university policy requires all students to gain work experience, aiming to develop their leadership and organizational skills, which may increase their employability. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加简洁明了。同时，将"organized skills"更正为"organizational skills"。)

From the listening material, the woman totally disagrees with that. Based on the listening material, the woman strongly disagrees with this policy. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。)

First of all, she thinks we can not improve our leadership and organized skills. Firstly, she believes that students cannot improve their leadership and organizational skills through such work experience. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。同时，将"organized skills"更正为"organizational skills"。)

For example, his elder brother who just did the basic task in the company like typing so he didn't learn something new from this. For instance, her elder brother only performed basic tasks like typing at his company, so he didn't learn anything new from it. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。同时，将"his"更正为"her"。)

Apart from this, she thinks there are other universities which ask their students to do this so there are lots of students at the same position. Additionally, she points out that other universities have similar requirements, resulting in many students competing for the same positions. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。)

The job from the company are not available for all of this. The companies cannot provide jobs for all these graduates. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加简洁明了。)

So she totally disagrees with the policy in the university. Thus, she completely disagrees with the university's policy. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。)

修订后的回答（140字）：

The new university policy requires all students to gain work experience, aiming to develop their leadership and organizational skills, which may increase their employability. Based on the listening material, the woman strongly disagrees with this policy. Firstly, she believes that students cannot improve their leadership and organizational skills through such work experience. For instance, her elder brother only performed basic tasks like typing at his company, so he didn't learn anything new from it. Additionally, she points out that other universities have similar requirements, resulting in many students competing for the same positions. The companies cannot provide jobs for all these graduates. Thus, she completely disagrees with the university's policy.

6.思维导图

- New university policy
  - Work experience
  - Develop leadership and organizational skills
  - Increase employability

- Woman's disagreement
  - Cannot improve skills through work experience
    - Example: elder brother's experience
  - Competition for positions
    - Other universities with similar requirements
    - Limited job availability for graduates

7.关键词