TOEFL TPO 7 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the university's plan. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.
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阅读段落
Sculpture Courses to Be Discontinued University administrators announced yesterday that the sculpture program, a division of the art department, will be eliminated. "The main reason is a lack of student interest," reported one administrator. "Although the number of art students has increased, fewer and fewer art majors are taking sculpture classes." Furthermore, the department's only sculpture professor is retiring this year. "Given the art department's limited budget," the administrator explained, "it just doesn't make sense to hire a new full-time professor to teach sculpture for only a handful of students."
题目
The woman expresses her opinion of the university's plan. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.
用户样本与评估结果
1用户样本 #1
分数23
用户样本 #1
评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数
23. 3.表达
在表达方面,发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致,但偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力,建议发言者注意以下几点:1)在练习时尝试减少不必要的停顿,使语言更流畅;2)注意正确发音,以避免拼写错误;3)在实际考试中保持自然的语调和节奏。
4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples from the reading and listening materials. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. To enhance the response, the speaker could consider the following suggestions: 1) Provide a clearer introduction to the woman's opinion and her disagreement with the university's plan; 2) Elaborate more on the reasons she gives for her opinion, such as explaining how the current requirements limit students' ability to explore other interests; 3) Offer more specific examples or details from the listening material to support her points, such as mentioning how many painting teachers are also skilled sculptors.
5.语言使用Original Answer: The reading states that the sculpture courses will be discontinued in this semester. The reading passage states that the sculpture courses will be discontinued this semester. (将“in”改为“this”,使语言更自然) The first reason is that they think children lack interest in this lesson, One reason is that the university believes students lack interest in these courses, (用“students”替换“children”,并将“lesson”改为“courses”以保持一致性) and the second reason is that the professor who teaches this class is retiring this year, so they have limited budget. and another reason is that the professor teaching these courses is retiring, leading to a limited budget. (简化句子结构,使其更流畅) In the listening, however, the women disagree. The first reason is that it's not that students don't want to take this class, it's that they just don't have time. They have so much required class to do, so they haven't so much time to choose the different classes. The second reason is that they can hire a part-time professor or just ask those who can teach the second field teacher to finish that.
Revised Answer (140 words):
The reading passage states that the sculpture courses will be discontinued this semester. One reason is that the university believes students lack interest in these courses, and another reason is that the professor teaching these courses is retiring, leading to a limited budget. In the listening, however, the woman disagrees. She argues that the low enrollment is not due to students' lack of interest in sculpture courses, but rather their limited time to take optional classes because of numerous required courses in painting and drawing. She suggests that if the department revised its requirements, art majors could explore a wider variety of classes. Additionally, she proposes hiring a part-time professor or utilizing existing faculty with secondary expertise in sculpture to continue offering these courses.
6.思维导图
- Introduction
- Reading passage
- Sculpture courses discontinued
- Reasons: lack of interest, retiring professor, limited budget
- Listening passage
- Woman disagrees
- Woman's opinion
- Low enrollment not due to lack of interest
- Limited time for optional classes
- Numerous required courses in painting and drawing
- Suggestions
- Revise department requirements
- Allow art majors to explore a wider variety of classes
- Hire part-time professor or utilize existing faculty with secondary expertise in sculpture
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinued | /dɪskənˈtɪnjud/ | adjective | No longer being made or provided | 停产的,停止的 | The university decided to discontinue the sculpture courses due to low enrollment. |
| Enrollment | /ɪnˈroʊlmənt/ | noun | The process of arranging to join a school | 注册,招生 | The low enrollment in sculpture courses led the university to reconsider its offerings. |
| Requirements | /rɪˈkwaɪərmənts/ | noun | Things that are needed or demanded | 要求,需求 | The art department should revise its requirements to allow students more flexibility in course selection. |
| Part-time | /pɑrtˈtaɪm/ | adjective | Involving work for only part of the day | 兼职的 | Hiring a part-time professor could be a cost-effective solution to maintain the sculpture courses. |
| Expertise | /ˌɛkspərˈtiːz/ | noun | Special skills or knowledge in a subject | 专业知识,专长 | The department could utilize faculty with secondary expertise in sculpture to continue offering these courses. |
2用户样本 #2
分数23
用户样本 #2
评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数
23. 3.表达
总体来说,回答的表达较为清晰,但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高表达能力,建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性,减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意发音的准确性,以避免拼写错误。
4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求,能够概括女生的观点及其理由。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化,例如可以先陈述女生的观点,然后再分别阐述她提出的两个理由。此外,在解释原因时可以更具体一些,以便让听众更容易理解。总之,在练习时注意提高回答的条理性和连贯性。
5.语言使用Original: The university plans to eliminate the sculpture courses. The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture courses. (将“eliminate”改为“discontinue”,使表达更自然。)
Original: First, there are a lack of students who are interested in sculpture. First, there is a lack of students interested in sculpture. (将“there are a lack”改为“there is a lack”,使语法更准确。)
Original: Second, the only full-time professor has retired and the limited budget disables them to hire another full-time professor. Second, the only full-time professor has retired, and the limited budget prevents them from hiring another full-time professor. (将“disables”改为“prevents”,使表达更自然。)
Original: The first, it's not because few students want to study sculpture, it's just because they don't have enough time. Firstly, it's not that few students want to study sculpture; it's just that they don't have enough time. (将“The first”改为“Firstly”,使表达更自然。)
Original: They have a lot of other requirements and they have no optional courses. They have many other requirements and no optional courses available. (将“a lot of”改为“many”,使表达更自然。)
Original: The required courses like painting, drawing have taken up all their time. The required courses, such as painting and drawing, consume all their time. (将“have taken up”改为“consume”,使表达更自然。)
Original: Second, money is drastic and the university can hire a part-time professor. Secondly, the university can hire a part-time professor to address the budget issue. (将“money is drastic”改为“to address the budget issue”,使表达更准确。)
Original: The art teachers, many of them have secondary fields and a lot of teachers majoring in painting are also good sculptors. Many art teachers have secondary fields, and several painting instructors are also skilled sculptors. (将“a lot of”改为“several”,使表达更自然。)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture courses. First, there is a lack of students interested in sculpture. Second, the only full-time professor has retired, and the limited budget prevents them from hiring another full-time professor. However, in the conversation, the woman feels upset about this. Firstly, it's not that few students want to study sculpture; it's just that they don't have enough time. They have many other requirements and no optional courses available. The required courses, such as painting and drawing, consume all their time. Secondly, the university can hire a part-time professor to address the budget issue. Many art teachers have secondary fields, and several painting instructors are also skilled sculptors.
6.思维导图
- Discontinue Sculpture Courses
- Lack of students interested
- Retired full-time professor
- Limited budget
- Woman's Opinion
- Upset about the decision
- Reasons
- Not lack of interest, but lack of time
- Many other requirements
- No optional courses available
- Budget issue can be addressed
- Hire a part-time professor
- Utilize teachers with secondary fields in sculpture
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Simplified Chinese Translation | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | to stop doing or providing something | 停止,中断 | The university decided to discontinue the sculpture courses due to budget constraints and low student interest. |
| optional | /ˈɒpʃənəl/ | adjective | available as a choice but not required | 可选择的,非强制的 | The sculpture courses were optional, which made it difficult for students to fit them into their busy schedules. |
| requirements | /rɪˈkwaɪərmənts/ | noun | things that are needed or wanted | 要求,需求 | The art majors had many requirements, leaving them with little time for optional courses like sculpture. |
| part-time | /pɑːtˈtaɪm/ | adjective | involving work that is done for only some of the day or week | 兼职的 | The university could hire a part-time professor to teach sculpture courses, addressing the budget issue. |
| secondary | /ˈsɛkəndəri/ | adjective | less important than related things; not primary | 次要的,副的 | Many art teachers had secondary fields in sculpture, so they could potentially teach the discontinued courses. |
3用户样本 #3
分数23
用户样本 #3
评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数
23. 3.表达
总体来说,回答流畅,但有些地方稍显拖沓。建议在练习时注意语速的控制,尽量保持一致。此外,注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。
4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求,但可以进一步优化组织结构。建议在回答时明确提出女生的观点,并用适当的连接词将理由串联起来,使回答更加条理清晰。
5.语言使用Original: The passage suggests to discontinue the sculpture class for two reasons that there are fewer people measuring it and the university doesn't have enough money to hire professors. The passage suggests discontinuing the sculpture class for two reasons: fewer students are majoring in it, and the university lacks funds to hire professors.(建议使用更自然的表达方式,同时注意句子结构和词汇的准确性。)
Original: In the conversation, however, the women totally disagree with such a stance. In the conversation, however, the woman strongly disagrees with this decision.(注意使用正确的单复数形式,并使用更自然的表达方式。)
Original: The first point is that it is a great loss for the university. Her first point is that this would be a significant loss for the university.(使用更准确的词汇和自然的表达方式。)
Original: Most students don't measure in it not because they don't like it but because they don't have time The sculpture class is optional but the required class takes most of the students' time. Most students don't major in it not because they dislike it, but due to a lack of time. The sculpture class is optional, while required classes consume most of their time.(注意句子结构和词汇的准确性,同时保持语言流畅。)
Original: She also believes that the problem of professors could be solved. She also believes that the issue with professors can be resolved.(使用更自然的表达方式。)
Original: They can hire part-time professors to teach the classes. The university could hire part-time professors to teach the classes.(使用更准确的主语。)
Original: Besides, the teachers in other subjects can also teach the class. Additionally, instructors from other disciplines could also teach the class.(使用更自然的表达方式和词汇。)
Original: For example, several painting professors are also good sculptors. For instance, some painting professors are skilled sculptors as well.(使用更自然的表达方式。)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The passage suggests discontinuing the sculpture class for two reasons: fewer students are majoring in it, and the university lacks funds to hire professors. In the conversation, however, the woman strongly disagrees with this decision. Her first point is that this would be a significant loss for the university. Most students don't major in it not because they dislike it, but due to a lack of time. The sculpture class is optional, while required classes consume most of their time. She also believes that the issue with professors can be resolved. The university could hire part-time professors to teach the classes. Additionally, instructors from other disciplines could also teach the class. For instance, some painting professors are skilled sculptors as well.
6.思维导图
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Discontinuing Sculpture Class
- Fewer students majoring
- Limited funds for professors
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Woman's Disagreement
- Significant loss for university
- Lack of time for optional classes
- Resolving professor issue
- Part-time professors
- Instructors from other disciplines
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | to stop doing or providing something | 停止,中断 | I believe discontinuing the sculpture class would be detrimental to the university's art program. |
| major | /ˈmeɪdʒər/ | noun | a student's principal subject of study | 主修 | Many art students major in painting, but some are also interested in sculpture. |
| optional | /ˈɒpʃənl/ | adjective | available as a choice but not required | 可选择的,非强制的 | The sculpture class is optional, so students can decide whether or not to take it. |
| part-time | /pɑːrt taɪm/ | adjective | involving less than the standard work hours | 兼职的 | The university could hire a part-time professor to teach the sculpture class. |
| interdisciplinary | /ˌɪntərdɪsəˈplɪnəri/ | adjective | relating to more than one branch of knowledge | 跨学科的 | Interdisciplinary teaching could help art students explore various aspects of their field. |
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评估结果
1.Sub Scores
Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.Estimated Scores
23. 3.Delivery
The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation problems that result from inappropriate pauses. To improve delivery, the speaker should practice proper pausing and work on pronunciation to avoid spelling errors.
4.Topic Development
The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. The speaker should focus on providing more specific details and examples to better support their opinion. Additionally, the speaker could work on making smoother transitions between ideas to enhance the overall flow of the response.
5.Language UseOriginal Answer: There is an announcement from the University of Michigan that the sculpture classes will be eliminated. The University of Michigan announced the elimination of sculpture classes. (Changed passive voice to active voice and made the sentence more concise) The woman in the conversation disagreed with this announcement because first of all, students aren't interested in sculpture, but they have no time. The woman disagrees with this decision, stating that students are interested in sculpture but lack time. (Clarified the woman's opinion and corrected grammar) It isn't that the students don't want to take the sculpture class, but they have no time to take them because there are so many requirement classes, Students don't have time for sculpture classes due to numerous required courses, (Simplified sentence structure and corrected grammar) as the sculpture class is optional and painting and drawing classes take up too much time. since sculpture is optional while painting and drawing classes consume most of their time. (Improved sentence structure and word choice) The second is that the limited budget isn't a big deal. Secondly, she believes that budget constraints should not be a major issue. (Improved clarity and grammar) The school can hire more part-time teachers, and the already hired teachers have second and at least several painting teachers are great at sculptures, The university could hire part-time instructors or utilize existing faculty who have expertise in sculpture, (Corrected grammar and improved sentence structure) as the woman knew. as the woman points out. (Improved clarity and word choice)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The University of Michigan announced the elimination of sculpture classes. The woman disagrees with this decision, stating that students are interested in sculpture but lack time. Students don't have time for sculpture classes due to numerous required courses, since sculpture is optional while painting and drawing classes consume most of their time. Secondly, she believes that budget constraints should not be a major issue. The university could hire part-time instructors or utilize existing faculty who have expertise in sculpture, as the woman points out. To achieve a score of 30, the speaker should focus on using advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and strong conclusions in their response. Additionally, practicing pronunciation will help avoid spelling errors and improve overall language use.
6.Mind Map
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University of Michigan
- Elimination of sculpture classes
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Woman's disagreement
- Reasons
- Students' interest in sculpture
- Lack of time due to required courses
- Budget constraints
- Solutions
- Part-time instructors
- Utilize existing faculty with expertise in sculpture
- Solutions
- Students' interest in sculpture
- Reasons
7.Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| elimination | /ɪˌlɪmɪˈneɪʃən/ | noun | The act of removing or getting rid of something | The elimination of sculpture classes at the university is a controversial decision. |
| constraints | /kənˈstreɪnts/ | noun | Limitations or restrictions | Despite budget constraints, the university should find alternative solutions to maintain the sculpture program. |
| part-time | /pɑːrtˈtaɪm/ | adjective | Involving work for only a portion of the normal working day or week | Hiring part-time instructors could be a cost-effective solution to keep the sculpture classes running. |
| expertise | /ˌekspərˈtiːz/ | noun | Special skills or knowledge in a particular field | The university should utilize faculty members who have expertise in sculpture to teach the classes. |
| controversial | /ˌkɒntrəˈvɜːrʃəl/ | adjective | Causing disagreement or discussion | The woman believes that the elimination of sculpture classes is a controversial decision that needs further discussion. |
5用户样本 #5
分数23
用户样本 #5
评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23
3.表达 在表达方面,你的 回答相对清晰,但仍有改进的空间。要确保语速一致,适当地使用停顿。此外,注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。建议多练习发音和语调,以提高口语表达能力。
4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is coherent and well-organized, but it could be improved by providing more specific examples or details to support your points. Additionally, try to make clearer connections between ideas to enhance the overall flow of your response. Practicing more on organizing your thoughts and elaborating on the reasons will help you improve in this area.
5.语言使用Original Answer: According to the announcement, the university is planning to eliminate the sculpture courses in the future, and a woman in the conversation feels upset about this plan. The university announced plans to discontinue the sculpture courses, which upsets a woman in the conversation. (简化句子,使其更自然) In the first place, she believes that the students are not taking the sculpture courses because they do not have sufficient time to do so, instead of the lack of interest. Firstly, she thinks students aren't taking sculpture courses due to insufficient time rather than a lack of interest. (简化句子,使其更自然) Indeed, the students have some required courses such as the paintings and the drawings, which take up all the time, In fact, required courses like painting and drawing consume most of their time, (去掉重复的定冠词,改善语言流畅度) and they do have the interest in a variety of the classes. and they are indeed interested in various classes. (简化句子,使其更自然) Secondly, despite the retiring professor and the limited budget, the woman suggests the university to hire a part-time professor to give this course, Secondly, despite the retiring professor and limited budget, the woman suggests the university hire a part-time professor to teach the course, (改善语言流畅度) or to let the other professors to give this course as a secondary field. or allow other professors to teach it as a secondary field. (简化句子,使其更自然)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The university announced plans to discontinue the sculpture courses, which upsets a woman in the conversation. Firstly, she thinks students aren't taking sculpture courses due to insufficient time rather than a lack of interest. In fact, required courses like painting and drawing consume most of their time, and they are indeed interested in various classes. Secondly, despite the retiring professor and limited budget, the woman suggests the university hire a part-time professor to teach the course or allow other professors to teach it as a secondary field. By addressing these concerns and offering alternative solutions, she hopes that the university will reconsider its decision and continue offering sculpture courses for art students who are genuinely interested in exploring different artistic disciplines.
6.思维导图
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University's Plan
- Discontinue sculpture courses
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Woman's Opinion
- Upset about the plan
- Reasons
- Insufficient time for students
- Required courses consume time
- Interest in various classes
- Alternative solutions
- Hire a part-time professor
- Allow other professors to teach as a secondary field
- Insufficient time for students
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Simplified Chinese Translation | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | To stop doing or providing something | 停止,中断 | The university decided to discontinue the sculpture courses due to low enrollment. |
| Consume | /kənˈsuːm/ | verb | To use up, especially time or resources | 消耗,占用 | Required courses consume most of the students' time, leaving little room for optional classes. |
| Insufficient | /ˌɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/ | adjective | Not enough; inadequate | 不足的,不够的 | Insufficient time is the main reason students cannot take a variety of classes. |
| Alternative | /ɔːlˈtɜːrnətɪv/ | adjective/noun | Offering another option or possibility | 可替代的,替代方案 | The woman suggests alternative solutions, such as hiring a part-time professor for the sculpture course. |
| Reconsider | /ˌriːkənˈsɪdər/ | verb | To think again about a decision or opinion | 重新考虑 | The woman hopes the university will reconsider its decision and continue offering sculpture courses. |
6用户样本 #6
用户样本 #6
评估结果
- Sub Scores
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Delivery: 3
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Topic Development: 3.5
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Language Use: 3
- Estimated Scores
- Total Score: 23
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Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with pronunciation and word choice that could be improved. For example, the phrase "the university plans to decline the sculpture class" could be better phrased as "the university plans to discontinue the sculpture program." Additionally, the speaker should work on pronouncing words like "university" and "sculpture" more clearly to avoid any confusion.
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Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples from the listening passage. The speaker effectively summarizes the woman's opinion and provides reasons for her disagreement with the university's plan. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details from the listening passage to further support the woman's opinion. For example, mentioning that many art majors are interested in taking sculpture classes but cannot due to their required courses would strengthen the argument. Overall, focusing on incorporating more specific details from the listening passage will help improve topic development in future responses.
Original: The university plans to declinediscontinue the sculpture class due to the low enrollment and the retirement of a professor. And the woman disapproved of this decision made by university. And first, she refused the claim of university that students have low interest in taking the sculpture class. However, she explained that students are occupied with too much major requirements in their painting and drawing class while they have no time for optional classes like sculpture. And she suggests that universities should provide a variety of classes for students. And second, the students suggest that universities should hire part-time professors or scholars that have a second field in sculpture to continue the class rather than saying that there is a low budget for hiring new professors to continue the sculpture class.
(Replace "decline" with "discontinue" for more accurate vocabulary usage.)
Revised (140 words): The university plans to discontinue the sculpture program due to low enrollment and the retirement of a professor. The woman disagrees with this decision made by the university. Firstly, she challenges the university's claim that students have low interest in taking sculpture classes. Instead, she explains that art majors are occupied with numerous required courses in painting and drawing, leaving them no time for optional classes like sculpture. She suggests that universities should offer a more diverse range of classes for students. Secondly, she proposes that universities could hire part-time professors or instructors with expertise in sculpture as an alternative solution, rather than claiming there is a limited budget for hiring new full-time professors to continue the sculpture program.
(Improved sentence structure, vocabulary, and grammar for a more natural-sounding language style.)
- Mind Map
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Discontinue sculpture program
- Low enrollment
- Retirement of professor
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Woman's disagreement
- Challenging low interest claim
- Art majors occupied with required courses
- Suggestion for diverse class offerings
- Alternative solutions
- Part-time professors or instructors
- Expertise in sculpture
- Challenging low interest claim
- Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | Verb | To stop doing or providing something, especially something that has been done or provided for a long time. | The university plans to discontinue the sculpture program due to low enrollment. |
| Diverse | /daɪˈvɜrs, dɪˈvɜrs/ | Adjective | Including many different types of people or things. | The woman suggests that universities should offer a more diverse range of classes for students. |
| Occupied | /ˈɒkjupaɪd/ | Adjective | Busy; being used by someone. | Art majors are occupied with numerous required courses in painting and drawing, leaving them no time for optional classes like sculpture. |
| Alternative | /ɔːlˈtɜrnətɪv/ | Adjective/Noun | Different from something else and able to be used instead of it; a different way of doing something. | She proposes alternative solutions, such as hiring part-time professors or instructors with expertise in sculpture. |
| Expertise | /ˌekspərˈtiːz/ | Noun | Special skills or knowledge in a particular subject, especially one that you have from personal experience. | Universities could hire instructors with expertise in sculpture as an alternative solution to discontinuing the program. |
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分数23
用户样本 #7
评估结果
1.子项得分
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交付:3
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主题发展:3
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语言使用:3
2.预估分数
- 总分:23
3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰,但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。为了提高表达能力,建议练习更流畅、自然的语速,并减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音,以避免拼写错误。
4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的,但可以进一步加强。在解释女生观点时,可以更详细地说明她提到的原因,并强调这些原因与大学计划之间的关系。此外,尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加流畅。
5.语言使用原文:Well, the university is going to discontinue a sculpture course. The university plans to discontinue the sculpture course.(改为更自然的表达方式)
This is because a lack of students' interest. This is due to a lack of student interest.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意名词所有格)
Less are the major students take part in this class. Fewer art majors are participating in this class.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意使用正确的比较级)
And second, the only professor teach this course is retiring this year. Additionally, the only professor teaching this course will retire this year.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意动词时态和连词)
However, the girls dislike the ideas and she thinks it's a loss for the department. However, the woman disagrees with the decision and believes it's a loss for the department.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意名词和代词的一致性)
Because first, students are actually interested in this class. But they have no time to take this class with other requirements. Firstly, students are indeed interested in this class, but they don't have time to take it due to other requirements.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意连接词和语句结构)
Other requirement courses take up their whole time. Other required courses occupy most of their time.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意名词和动词的搭配)
And second, about a professor. Secondly, regarding the professor,(改为更自然的表达方式,注意连接词和语句结构)
The girls think the university can hire part-time professors to teach the course. The woman believes the university could hire part-time professors to teach the course.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意名词和代词的一致性)
Or there are professors in the department have secondary field. Alternatively, some professors in the department have secondary fields.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意语句结构)
They can easily teach the courses too. They could also easily teach the course.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意动词时态)
So that's the reason why the girls dislike the proposal. So those are the reasons why the woman disagrees with the proposal.(改为更自然的表达方式,注意名词和代词的一致性)
修订版(140字):
The university plans to discontinue the sculpture course due to a lack of student interest and the upcoming retirement of the only professor teaching this course. However, the woman disagrees with the decision and believes it's a loss for the department. Firstly, students are indeed interested in this class, but they don't have time to take it due to other requirements. Other required courses occupy most of their time. Secondly, regarding the professor, the woman believes the university could hire part-time professors to teach the course. Alternatively, some professors in the department have secondary fields and could also easily teach the course. So those are the reasons why the woman disagrees with the proposal.
6.思维导图
- Discontinuing Sculpture Course
- Lack of student interest
- Retirement of the only professor
- Woman's Disagreement
- Students' interest and time constraints
- Other required courses
- Solutions for the professor issue
- Part-time professors
- Professors with secondary fields
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | to stop doing or providing something | 停止,中断 | The university plans to discontinue the sculpture course due to a lack of student interest. |
| constraint | /kənˈstreɪnt/ | noun | a limitation or restriction | 约束,限制 | Students are interested in the sculpture course, but time constraints prevent them from taking it. |
| part-time | /ˈpɑːrt taɪm/ | adjective | involving less than the standard work hours | 兼职的,部分时间的 | The woman suggests hiring part-time professors to teach the sculpture course. |
| secondary | /ˈsɛkəndəri/ | adjective | less important than something else | 次要的,副的 | Some professors in the department have secondary fields and could teach the sculpture course. |
| alternative | /ɔːlˈtɜːrnətɪv/ | noun | a different option or choice | 可供选择的事物,替代方案 | The woman believes that there are alternative solutions to the professor issue in the sculpture course. |
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评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23
3.表达 在表达方面,你的回答相对清晰,但仍有改进的空间。为了提高发音的准确性,请注意一些单词的发音,例如“universities”和“sculptures”。此外,尝试保持一致的语速,并减少不必要的停顿。练习朗读和模仿母语人士的发音可以帮助你在这方面取得进步。
4.话题发展 在话题发展方面,你的回答基本上涵盖了女士对大学计划的观点及其原因。然而,你可以更详细地解释她提出的替代方案,例如雇佣兼职教授或利用具备雕塑技能的现有教授。此外,在总结时,请确保重申女士对取消课程的反对意见。通过提供更多细节和清晰地组织观点,你将 能够更好地发展话题。
5.语言使用Original Answer: The woman in the conversation believes that it is a great loss for the universities to abolish the art sculpture class. The woman in the conversation believes that it is a great loss for the university to discontinue the sculpture program. (将“universities”改为“university”,将“abolish”改为“discontinue”,将“art sculpture class”改为“sculpture program”,使表达更准确。) She believes that the reason why there are less people taking art sculptures is because there are too many requirements in art major that it takes up all the time of the students. She thinks that the reason for fewer students taking sculpture courses is due to the numerous requirements in the art major, leaving students with no time for these classes. (将“less people”改为“fewer students”,将“art sculptures”改为“sculpture courses”,调整句子结构,使表达更清晰。)
Therefore, there have no time left to study art sculpture. (This sentence has been integrated into the previous sentence for better flow.) She suggests an alternative solution to the professor retiring as she thinks the university should hire a part-time professor or maybe or a lot of art professors have a secondary field in art sculptures which they can also be used in teaching art sculpture rather than cancelling the class at all. She suggests an alternative solution to hiring a full-time professor by proposing that the university could employ a part-time professor or utilize existing art professors with secondary expertise in sculpture, instead of canceling the program altogether. (调整句子结构,将“art sculptures”改为“sculpture”,使表达更自然。)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The woman in the conversation believes that it is a great loss for the university to discontinue the sculpture program. She thinks that the reason for fewer students taking sculpture courses is due to the numerous requirements in the art major, leaving students with no time for these classes. She suggests an alternative solution to hiring a full-time professor by proposing that the university could employ a part-time professor or utilize existing art professors with secondary expertise in sculpture, instead of canceling the program altogether. By offering more flexibility in course requirements and exploring alternative teaching options, she believes that the university can maintain its commitment to providing a diverse range of artistic opportunities for students while addressing budgetary concerns.
6.思维导图
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Woman's opinion
- Great loss for the university
- Discontinuing sculpture program
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Reason for fewer students
- Numerous requirements in art major
- No time for sculpture courses
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Alternative solution
- Part-time professor
- Utilize existing art professors with secondary expertise in sculpture
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Maintain diverse artistic opportunities
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Simplified Chinese Translation | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | to stop doing or providing something, especially something that has been done or provided for a long time | 停止,中断 | The university's decision to discontinue the sculpture program has sparked a debate among students and faculty members. |
| numerous | /ˈnuːmərəs/ | adjective | many in number | 许多的,大量的 | The numerous requirements in the art major leave students with little time to explore other interests like sculpture. |
| alternative | /ɔːlˈtɜːrnətɪv/ | adjective/noun | different from something else and able to be used instead of it; a different way of doing something | 可替代的,替代方案 | The woman suggests an alternative solution by hiring a part-time professor instead of canceling the sculpture program altogether. |
| expertise | /ˌekspərˈtiːz/ | noun | special skills or knowledge in a particular subject, that you learn by experience or training | 专业知识,专长 | The university could utilize existing art professors with secondary expertise in sculpture to teach the courses. |
| diverse | /daɪˈvɜːrs/ | adjective | including many different types of things or people | 多样的,不同的 | The woman believes that maintaining a diverse range of artistic opportunities is essential for the students' overall development. |
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评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23
3.表达 在表达方面,你的发音大部分清晰,但有时会出现一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发音的准确性,请注意在练习发音时避免不适当的停顿。此外,尝试保持一致的语速,以便让听众更容易理解你的观点。
4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, you have provided a coherent response that covers the main points from the listening and reading passages. However, you could improve by providing more specific examples or details to support your points. Additionally, try to make clearer connections between ideas to enhance the overall organization of your response.
5.语言使用Original Answer: According to the article, universities have decided to discontinue sculpture courses. According to the article, the university has decided to discontinue the sculpture courses. (根据文章,大学已决定停止雕 塑课程。)
This is because the students' lack of interest of this class and the only professor is retiring this year. This is due to students' lack of interest in these classes and the retirement of the only professor this year. (这是因为学生对这些课程缺乏兴趣,以及今年唯一的教授即将退休。)
The woman opposed these changes, arguing that the school is wrong. The woman opposes these changes, arguing that the university's decision is incorrect. (女士反对这些变化,认为大学的决定是错误的。)
To begin with, she pointed that they have interest of this class, but they did not go to the class because of the many requirements of painting classes. Firstly, she points out that students are interested in these classes, but they cannot attend them due to numerous requirements for painting classes. (首先,她指出学生对这些课程感兴趣,但由于绘画课程的许多要求,他们无法参加。)
That led to less time to attend to the sculpture class. This results in less time available for attending sculpture classes. (这导致了更少的时间参加雕塑课程。)
Moreover, she argues that the administration can hire a part-time professor, and also many painting teachers have secondary fields that they are experts in the sculpture can teach. Moreover, she argues that the administration could hire a part-time professor, and many painting teachers have secondary fields in which they are experts, such as sculpture, and could teach these classes. (此外,她认为行政部门可以雇佣兼职教授,许多绘画老师在其他领域也是专家,如雕塑,可以教授这些课程。)
Revised Answer (140 words):
According to the article, the university has decided to discontinue the sculpture courses. This is due to students' lack of interest in these classes and the retirement of the only professor this year. The woman opposes these changes, arguing that the university's decision is incorrect. Firstly, she points out that students are interested in these classes, but they cannot attend them due to numerous requirements for painting classes. This results in less time available for attending sculpture classes. Moreover, she argues that the administration could hire a part-time professor, and many painting teachers have secondary fields in which they are experts, such as sculpture, and could teach these classes. By addressing these issues and providing alternative solutions, the woman believes that discontinuing the sculpture courses is not the best course of action for the university.
6.思维导图
- University's decision
- Discontinue sculpture courses
- Reasons: lack of interest, professor retiring
- Woman's opinion
- Opposes decision
- Reasons:
- Students' interest exists
- Hindered by painting class requirements
- Alternative solutions
- Hire part-time professor
- Utilize painting teachers with secondary expertise in sculpture
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | to stop doing or providing something | 停止,中断 | I disagree with the university's decision to discontinue the sculpture courses because it limits students' options. |
| hinder | /ˈhɪndər/ | verb | to make it difficult for someone to do something or for something to happen | 阻碍,妨碍 | The numerous requirements for painting classes hinder students from exploring other art forms like sculpture. |
| alternative | /ɔːlˈtɜːrnətɪv/ | adjective/noun | different from something else and able to be used instead of it; a choice between two or more things | 可供选择的,替代的;选择,替代品 | The university should consider alternative solutions, such as hiring a part-time professor, to keep the sculpture program alive. |
| expertise | /ˌekspərˈtiːz/ | noun | a high level of knowledge or skill | 专业知识,专长 | Many painting teachers have expertise in sculpture, so they could teach these classes without hiring a new professor. |
| administration | /ədˌmɪnɪˈstreɪʃən/ | noun | the people who are responsible for running a business, organization, or institution | 管理,行政部门 | The administration should listen to students' opinions and reconsider their decision to discontinue the sculpture courses. |
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评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数
23. 3.表达
总体来说,回答中的表达较为清晰,但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力,建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性,减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意发音的准确性,以避免拼写错误。
4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了所需的信息,但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待提高。建议在练习时注意将观点和原因进行更清晰的组织和连接,以便让听众更容易理解。此外,在提供支持或举例时,尽量确保内容充分且相关。
5.语言使用Original: The university administrator announced that the school's sculpture programs were eliminated since art students' inquiries decreased the majors taking sculpture classes. The university administrator announced that the school's sculpture programs were discontinued due to a decrease in art students' interest in taking sculpture classes.(将"eliminated"改为"discontinued",使表达更准确;将"inquiries decreased the majors taking sculpture classes"改为"a decrease in art students' interest in taking sculpture classes",使句子结构更清晰。)
Original: This caused a lack of students' interest. This led to a lack of student interest.(将"caused"改为"led to",使表达更自然;将"students'"改为"student",使语法更准确。)
Original: And also, the sculpture professor is retiring this year. Additionally, the sculpture professor is retiring this year.(将"And also"改为"Additionally",使连接词更地道。)
Original: This limited the budget. This has limited the budget.(将"This limited the budget."改为"This has limited the budget.",使时态更准确。)
Original: In addition, art is limited optional. Furthermore, art courses are limited in options.(将"In addition, art is limited optional."改为"Furthermore, art courses are limited in options.",使句子结构更清晰。)
Original: So for students take all over time. Thus, students have limited time to take other courses.(将"So for students take all over time."改为"Thus, students have limited time to take other courses.",使句子结构更清晰。)
Original: But on the other hand, art major student has variety optional to do all interest things they like. On the other hand, art major students have a variety of options to pursue their interests.(将"art major student has variety optional to do all interest things they like"改为"art major students have a variety of options to pursue their interests",使句子结构更清晰。)
Original: Second, the money is not a vital problem. Secondly, money is not a crucial issue.(将"vital problem"改为"crucial issue",使表达更地道。)
Original: Because the school can able to hire part-time job professor in the department. This is because the school can hire part-time professors in the department.(将"Because the school can able to hire part-time job professor in the department."改为"This is because the school can hire part-time professors in the department.",使句子结构更清晰。)
Original: Also in the department, there are also secondary field professor. Moreover, there are professors with secondary fields in the department as well.(将"Also in the department, there are also secondary field professor."改为"Moreover, there are professors with secondary fields in the department as well.",使句子结构更清晰。)
Original: They can also teach them. They can also teach the courses.(将"them"改为"the courses",使指代更清晰。)
Original: For example, painting teacher are also great in art sculpture. For instance, some painting teachers are also skilled in sculpture art.(将"painting teacher are also great in art sculpture"改为"some painting teachers are also skilled in sculpture art",使句子结构更清晰。)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The university administrator announced that the school's sculpture programs were discontinued due to a decrease in art students' interest in taking sculpture classes. This led to a lack of student interest. Additionally, the sculpture professor
6.思维导图
- University's Plan
- Discontinue sculpture program
- Reasons
- Decreased student interest
- Retiring professor
- Limited budget
- Woman's Opinion
- Disagrees with the plan
- Reasons
- Time-consuming required courses
- Need for different requirements
- Part-time professors as an option
- Professors with secondary fields available
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | verb | To stop doing or providing something | 停止,中断 | I disagree with the university's decision to discontinue the sculpture program because it limits students' options. |
| Requirement | /rɪˈkwaɪərmənt/ | noun | Something that is needed or demanded | 要求,需求 | The current course requirements prevent art students from exploring a variety of interests, such as sculpture. |
| Part-time | /pɑːrtˈtaɪm/ | adjective | Involving work for only part of the day | 兼职的 | Hiring a part-time professor could be a cost-effective solution to maintain the sculpture program. |
| Secondary | /ˈsɛkəndəri/ | adjective | Less important than something else | 次要的 | Some professors have secondary fields in sculpture and could teach these classes without hiring a new professor. |
| Time-consuming | /taɪm kənˈsjuːmɪŋ/ | adjective | Taking a lot of time to do | 耗时的 | The required courses are time-consuming, leaving students with little time to take optional classes like sculpture. |
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评估结果
1.Sub Scores
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Delivery: 2
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Topic Development: 3
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Language Use: 2
2.Estimated Scores
- Total Score: 19
3.Delivery The speaker's delivery could be improved by focusing on clearer speech and a more consistent pace. There are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow of the response, and some words are mispronounced, leading to spelling errors. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more fluidly and work on accurate pronunciation.
4.Topic Development The topic development is generally well-done, as the speaker provides a coherent response with clear connections between ideas. However, there could be more sufficient support or examples to strengthen the argument. To improve, the speaker should focus on providing more specific details and examples to support their points.
5.Language UseOriginal: the administration announces that sculpture program will be eliminated this year since students are lack of interested in the course and only a few students are attending the class additionally the only professor are retiring this year and due to the tight budget the university won't be able to hire a new full-time professor for just a handful of the students The administration announced that the sculpture program would be eliminated this year, as students showed a lack of interest in the course, and only a few students were attending the class. Additionally, the only professor is retiring this year, and due to the tight budget, the university won't be able to hire a new full-time professor for just a handful of students. (Corrected tense, subject-verb agreement, and added punctuation for clarity)
Original: the woman is really upset about this decision since she is a student majoring in art she realized that it is not because the students reluctance who don't want to take the classes because the the other requirements like painting and drawing are take up the majority of the time so if they have more time they can take variety of options The woman is really upset about this decision because she is an art major. She believes that it's not due to student reluctance but rather because other requirements, like painting and drawing, take up most of their time. If they had more time, they could explore a variety of options. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)
Original: moreover this announcement is drastic because it's not the issue of money they can hire some part-time professors or professors that have second fields in sculpture from other majors Moreover, this announcement is drastic because it's not just an issue of money. They could hire part-time professors or professors with secondary expertise in sculpture from other majors. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The administration announced that the sculpture program would be eliminated this year, as students showed a lack of interest in the course, and only a few students were attending the class. Additionally, the only professor is retiring this year, and due to the tight budget, the university won't be able to hire a new full-time professor for just a handful of students. The woman is really upset about this decision because she is an art major. She believes that it's not due to student reluctance but rather because other requirements, like painting and drawing, take up most of their time. If they had more time, they could explore a variety of options. Moreover, this announcement is drastic because it's not just an issue of money. They could hire part-time professors or professors with secondary expertise in sculpture from other majors.
6.Mind Map
- Administration announcement
- Sculpture program elimination
- Lack of student interest
- Few students attending
- Retiring professor
- Tight budget
- Woman's opinion
- Art major upset
- Other requirements taking up time
- Painting and drawing
- Variety of options needed
- Drastic announcement
- Not just a money issue
- Part-time professors
- Professors with secondary expertise in sculpture
7.Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Eliminate | /ɪˈlɪmɪneɪt/ | Verb | To remove or get rid of something | The university plans to eliminate the sculpture program due to low enrollment. |
| Drastic | /ˈdræstɪk/ | Adjective | Extreme in effect or action; severe or radical | The woman believes the university's decision to eliminate the sculpture program is drastic. |
| Reluctance | /rɪˈlʌktəns/ | Noun | Unwillingness or disinclination to do something | The woman thinks that student reluctance is not the main reason for low enrollment in sculpture classes. |
| Secondary | /ˈsɛkənˌdɛri/ | Adjective | Less important than related things; additional | Some professors have secondary expertise in sculpture, which could be utilized to teach the classes. |
| Part-time | /pɑrtˈtaɪm/ | Adjective | Involving or working less than customary or standard hours | The university could consider hiring part-time professors to teach sculpture classes instead of eliminating the program entirely. |
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评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.预估分数
23. 3.表达
从表达方面来看,这个回答的语音清晰,语速适中,但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高口语表达能力,建议练习更流利地说话,减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音,以避免拼写错误。
4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看,这个回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而,在解释女生观点时可以更详细地阐述她的理由。例如,在提到降低其他课程要求时,可以具体说明这将如何让学生有更多时间参加雕塑课程。此外,在提到兼职教授或第二领域教授时,可以进一步解释这些教授如何满足雕塑课程的需求。总之,为了提高话题发展能力,请在回答中提供更多细节和例子来支持观点。
5.语言使用原文:It is said in the announcement that the university is going to eliminate sculpture class because there are less art major students attending to this class. The announcement states that the university plans to eliminate the sculpture course due to a decrease in art major students enrolling in it.(将“less”改为“decrease”,使句子更自然;将“attending to”改为“enrolling in”,更符合语境。)
Besides, the only professors in sculpture class is retiring, and there is no much budget for university to hire new professors. Additionally, the only professor for the sculpture course is retiring, and the university has a limited budget for hiring new faculty members.(将“professors”改为“professor”,因为只有一位教授;将“no much budget”改为“a limited budget”,更自然;将“new professors”改为“new faculty members”,更准确。)
The woman disagrees with the idea. The woman opposes this decision.(将“idea”改为“decision”,更符合语境。)
Firstly, the reason why there is low enrollment for sculpture class is that there are many high requirement class that takes up students' time. Firstly, she believes that low enrollment in the sculpture course is due to numerous high-requirement classes occupying students' time.(将“there are many high requirement class”改为“numerous high-requirement classes”,使句子更自然。)
So students have no time to take sculpture class. As a result, students cannot find the time to enroll in the sculpture course.(将“take”改为“enroll in”,更符合语境。)
If university can lower the requirement on other class, students can take a variety of classes. If the university reduces the requirements for other courses, students would be able to explore a wider range of classes.(将“lower the requirement on”改为“reduces the requirements for”,更自然;将“take a variety of classes”改为“explore a wider range of classes”,更准确。)
Secondly, there are part-time professors or second field professors. Secondly, she suggests considering part-time instructors or professors with secondary expertise in sculpture.(将原句改为更自然的表达。)
For example, a professor in painting class can also teach sculpture class. For instance, a painting professor could potentially teach a sculpture course as well.(将原句改为更自然的表达。)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The announcement states that the university plans to eliminate the sculpture course due to a decrease in art major students enrolling in it. Additionally, the only professor for the sculpture course is retiring, and the university has a limited budget for hiring new faculty members. The woman opposes this decision. Firstly, she believes that low enrollment in the sculpture course is due to numerous high-requirement classes occupying students' time. As a result, students cannot find the time to enroll in the sculpture course. If the university reduces the requirements for other courses, students would be able to explore a wider range of classes. Secondly, she suggests considering part-time instructors or professors with secondary expertise in sculpture. For instance, a painting professor could potentially teach a sculpture course as well.
6.思维导图
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Announcement
- Eliminate sculpture course
- Decrease in art major students
- Retiring professor
- Limited budget
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Woman's opinion
- Opposes decision
- Reasons
- Low enrollment due to high-requirement classes
- Reducing requirements for other courses
- Exploring a wider range of classes
- Part-time instructors or professors with secondary expertise
- Painting professor teaching sculpture course
- Low enrollment due to high-requirement classes
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Eliminate | /ɪˈlɪmɪneɪt/ | Verb | To completely remove or get rid of something | 消除,排除 | The university plans to eliminate the sculpture course due to low enrollment. |
| Enrollment | /ɪnˈroʊlmənt/ | Noun | The process of arranging to join a school | 注册,入学 | The decrease in art major students enrolling in the sculpture course led to its elimination. |
| Requirement | /rɪˈkwaɪərmənt/ | Noun | Something that is needed or demanded | 要求,需求 | High-requirement classes prevent students from exploring a wider range of courses. |
| Part-time | /pɑrtˈtaɪm/ | Adjective | Involving work for only part of the day | 兼职的 | The woman suggests considering part-time instructors for the sculpture course. |
| Secondary | /ˈsɛkəndɛri/ | Adjective | Less important than related things | 次要的,副的 | Professors with secondary expertise in sculpture could potentially teach the course as well. |
13用户样本 #13
用户样本 #13
评估结果
1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3
2.Estimated Scores
24. 3.Delivery
The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and minimize unnecessary pauses. This will result in a more natural and smooth speech.
4.Topic Development The speaker does an excellent job of developing the topic by stating the woman's opinion and providing reasons for her disagreement with the university's decision. The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. No significant improvements are needed in this aspect.
5.Language UseOriginal: According to a recent announcement, the university will discontinue the sculpture program. It so happened due to a lack of student interest and also the only professor is retiring this year. The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture program due to a lack of student interest and the retirement of the only professor this year. (Rephrased for clarity and improved sentence structure)
However, the woman in the conversation disagreed with this idea. Nonetheless, the woman in the conversation opposes this decision. (Rephrased for a more advanced vocabulary)
If the university were flexible with required classes, they will have more time to sign up for the programs or classes they are interested in. If the university were more flexible with required classes, students would have more time to enroll in programs or classes that interest them. (Improved grammar and sentence structure)
Revised Answer (140 words):
The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture program due to a lack of student interest and the retirement of the only professor this year. Nonetheless, the woman in the conversation opposes this decision. Firstly, she claims that students didn't sign up for a sculpture program because they have no time to do so. If the university were more flexible with required classes, students would have more time to enroll in programs or classes that interest them. Furthermore, as to the professor, she said that money is not an issue because they could hire a part-time professor. Also, there are many art teachers in the university who have secondary fields, and it would be easy to find one who could teach sculpture. This revised answer demonstrates advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, a natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and a strong conclusion.
6.Mind Map
- Discontinuation of sculpture program
- Lack of student interest
- Retirement of the only professor
- Woman's opposition
- Students' lack of time
- Flexibility in required classes
- Hiring a part-time professor
- Art teachers with secondary fields
7.Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinuation | /ˌdɪskənˌtɪnjuˈeɪʃən/ | Noun | The act of stopping something from continuing or existing | The discontinuation of the sculpture program has caused disagreement among art students. |
| Opposition | /ˌɑpəˈzɪʃən/ | Noun | Strong disagreement with a plan or policy, especially when this is shown publicly | The woman expressed her opposition to the university's decision to discontinue the sculpture program. |
| Flexibility | /ˌflɛksəˈbɪləti/ | Noun | The quality of being able to change or be changed easily according to the situation | Increased flexibility in required classes would allow students to explore a wider variety of subjects. |
| Part-time | /pɑrtˈtaɪm/ | Adjective | Involving work for only part of the regular working day or week | Hiring a part-time professor could be a cost-effective solution for maintaining the sculpture program. |
| Secondary field | /ˈsɛkənˌdɛri fild/ | Noun | An additional area of expertise or interest that is not the primary focus of a person's profession | The university should consider utilizing art teachers with secondary fields in sculpture to continue offering classes in the subject. |
14用户样本 #14
用户样本 #14
评估结果
1.Sub Scores Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2
2.Estimated Scores
19. 3.Delivery
The speaker's delivery could be improved by focusing on clearer and more fluid speech. The pace should be consistent, with only occasional pauses. To enhance pronunciation, it is essential to practice and pay attention to the correct pronunciation of words. This will also help in reducing spelling errors that may arise due to inaccurate pronunciation.
4.Topic Development The response is somewhat coherent and organized, but it could be improved by providing clearer connections between ideas and offering more support or examples. The speaker should focus on presenting a well-structured response that effectively addresses the woman's opinion and reasons for holding that opinion. Additionally, using transition words and phrases can help create a more cohesive response.
5.Language UseThe department declares announced ("declares" is too formal; "announced" is more appropriate) they will eliminate the sculpture class, and there are less fewer (use "fewer" for countable nouns like "students") students to choose the class, and the only teachers teacher (singular form is needed here) will retire this semester. But the women woman (singular form is needed here) disagrees (remove "s" for subject-verb agreement) with these plans for several reasons. First, I think the less students choose this class, fewer students choosing this class is not because they aren't interested in it, (rephrase for clarity and correct grammar usage) because they have other essential classs (remove "s" for subject-verb agreement) to do, and they need to do other classes, so they don't have time to choose this class. Second, if the teacher will retire, the school can hire part-time teachers, or other teachers in the department may also can teach sculpture classes. So these are not problems.
Revised Answer (140 words):
The university announced that they will eliminate the sculpture class due to fewer students choosing it, and the only teacher will retire this semester. However, the woman disagrees with these plans for several reasons. First, she believes that fewer students choosing this class is not because they aren't interested in it, but because they have other required classes to complete, leaving them with no time to take the sculpture class. Second, she suggests that if the teacher retires, the school could hire a part-time teacher or ask other teachers in the department who have experience in sculpture to teach the class. Therefore, she thinks that these issues can be resolved and should not lead to the elimination of the sculpture program.
6.Mind Map
- University announcement
- Eliminate sculpture class
- Fewer students choosing it
- Teacher retiring
- Woman's disagreement
- Reasons
- Required classes taking up time
- Interest in sculpture still present
- Hiring part-time teacher or using existing faculty
7.Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Eliminate | /ɪˈlɪmɪneɪt/ | Verb | To completely remove or get rid of something | In my opinion, eliminating the sculpture class is not the best solution; instead, the university should revise its curriculum. |
| Disagree | /ˌdɪsəˈɡriː/ | Verb | To have or express a different opinion | I disagree with the university's decision to discontinue the sculpture program, as it limits students' artistic exploration. |
| Part-time | /ˈpɑːrtˌtaɪm/ | Adjective | Involving work for only part of the regular working day or week | Hiring a part-time teacher could be a cost-effective solution to maintain the sculpture class. |
| Faculty | /ˈfækəlti/ | Noun | The teaching staff of a university or college, or of one of its departments | The art department faculty includes several professors who are skilled in both painting and sculpture. |
| Curriculum | /kəˈrɪkjʊləm/ | Noun | The subjects comprising a course of study in a school or college | The university should consider revising the art curriculum to allow students more flexibility in choosing their classes. |
15用户样本 #15
用户样本 #15
评估结果
- Sub Scores
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Delivery: 3
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Topic Development: 4
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Language Use: 3
- Estimated Scores
- Total Score: 26
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Delivery The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with pronunciation that need to be addressed. To improve, the speaker should practice enunciating words more clearly and work on their pronunciation of certain words. Additionally, focusing on maintaining a steady pace throughout the response will help with overall delivery.
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Topic Development The speaker does an excellent job of providing a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The woman's opinion is clearly stated, and the reasons she gives for holding that opinion are well-explained. To further improve topic development, the speaker could consider adding more specific examples or details from the conversation to support their points.
Original Answer: The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture program due to a lack of student interest and the retirement of the only professor this year. Nonetheless, the woman in the conversation opposed this idea. Firstly, she claims that students didn't sign up for a sculpture program because they have no time to do so. If the university were more flexible with required classes, students would have more time to enroll in programs or classes that interest them. Furthermore, as to the professor, she said that money is not an issue because they could hire a part-time professor. In addition, there are many art teachers in the university who have secondary fields and it would be easy to find one who could teach sculpture.
Corrected Answer: The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture program due to a lack of student interest and the retirement of the only professor this year. Nonetheless, the woman in the conversation opposed disagrees with this idea. Firstly, she claims that students didn't did not sign up for a sculpture program because they have no time to do so. If the university were was more flexible with required classes, students would have more time to enroll in programs or classes that interest them. Furthermore, as to(regarding) the professor, she said that money is not an issue because they could hire a part-time professor. In addition, there are many art teachers in the university who have secondary fields(expertise), and it would be easy to find one who could teach sculpture.
Revised Answer (140 words): The university has decided to discontinue the sculpture program due to a lack of student interest and the retirement of the only professor this year. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this decision. She argues that students did not enroll in the sculpture program because they lack time, given their other required courses. If the university was more flexible with these requirements, students would have more opportunities to explore their interests. Furthermore, regarding the professor's retirement, she believes that money is not an issue as they could hire a part-time professor. Additionally, many art teachers at the university possess expertise in secondary fields, making it feasible to find one who could teach sculpture.
- Mind Map
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Discontinue sculpture program
- Lack of student interest
- Retirement of professor
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Woman's disagreement
- Students' lack of time
- Flexibility in required courses
- Professor's retirement
- Part-time professor option
- Art teachers with secondary expertise
- Students' lack of time
- Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | Verb | To stop doing or providing something, especially something that has been done or provided regularly. | The university decided to discontinue the sculpture program due to a lack of student interest. |
| Flexibility | /ˌflɛksəˈbɪlɪti/ | Noun | The quality of being able to change or be changed easily according to the situation. | If the university showed more flexibility in required courses, students could explore their interests better. |
| Feasible | /ˈfiːzəbl/ | Adjective | Possible and practical to do easily or conveniently. | It is feasible to find an art teacher with secondary expertise in sculpture. |
| Expertise | /ˌekspərˈtiːz/ | Noun | Special skills or knowledge in a particular subject, that you learn by experience or training. | Many art teachers at the university possess expertise in secondary fields. |
| Part-time | /pɑːrt taɪm/ | Adjective | Involving work for only part of the usual working day or week. | The woman suggested hiring a part-time professor to teach sculpture courses. |
16用户样本 #16
分数22
用户样本 #16
评估结果
1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5
2.预估分数
22. 3.表达
回答中的发音大部分清晰,但部分单词发音不准确,导致拼写错误。此外,部分句子的停顿不太合适。建议练习更多的发音和语音练习,以提高口语表达能力。
4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求,但在组织结构和论据方面还有待加强。建议在回答时更加明确地陈述女生的观点,并提供更充分的理由和例子来支持观点。同时,注意保持回答的连贯性和条理性。
5.语言使用Original Answer: University plans to discontinue sculpture courses. However, the woman disagrees with the announcement. Primarily, she believes that they take an art major, but it's not very correct. They don't want to join sculpture courses because they have no time requirement and the major is not sculpture. And based on the fact, she also mentioned that the professor problem is true. They have a money problem, so they can hire a part-time professor and maybe a painting teacher is agreed for the sculpture major and she can join the sculpture professor. She can join and become a sculpture professor too.
Corrected Answer: The university plans to discontinue the sculpture courses; however, the woman disagrees with this decision. Primarily, she believes that art majors are interested in these courses, but they don't have enough time due to other requirements. The issue is not a lack of interest in sculpture as a major. Furthermore, she acknowledges the professor's retirement but suggests that hiring a part-time professor or having a painting teacher with sculpting skills could resolve this issue. (修改了句子结构,词汇和语法,使表达更自然流畅。同时,对原文中的错误进行了纠正。)
Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to discontinue the sculpture courses; however, the woman strongly disagrees with this decision. She argues that art majors are indeed interested in taking sculpture classes, but they simply don't have enough time due to other mandatory course requirements within their major. The real issue lies in the curriculum structure rather than a lack of interest in sculpture as a major subject. Furthermore, while acknowledging the retirement of the current sculpture professor, she suggests alternative solutions to address the budget concerns. Instead of hiring a full-time professor, the university could consider employing a part-time instructor or even utilizing the skills of a painting teacher who also has expertise in sculpture. This way, the sculpture courses can continue to be offered without significantly impacting the department's budget.
6.思维导图
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Disagree with decision
- Art majors interested
- Time constraints
- Curriculum structure
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Professor's retirement
- Alternative solutions
- Part-time instructor
- Painting teacher with sculpting skills
- Alternative solutions
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Simplified Chinese Translation | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinue | /dɪskənˈtɪnju/ | Verb | To stop doing or providing something, especially temporarily | 停止,中断 | I disagree with the university's decision to discontinue the sculpture courses. |
| Curriculum | /kəˈrɪkjʊləm/ | Noun | The subjects comprising a course of study in a school or college | 课程,课程设置 | The curriculum structure should be revised to allow art majors more time for optional courses. |
| Constraints | /kənˈstreɪnts/ | Noun | Limitations or restrictions | 约束,限制 | Time constraints prevent art majors from taking sculpture classes. |
| Part-time | /pɑːrtˈtaɪm/ | Adjective | Involving work for only part of the regular working day or week | 兼职的 | Hiring a part-time instructor could be a solution to the budget concerns. |
| Expertise | /ˌekspərˈtiːz/ | Noun | Special skills or knowledge in a particular field | 专业知识,专 长 | A painting teacher with expertise in sculpture could teach the sculpture courses without extra cost. |
17用户样本 #17
用户样本 #17
评估结果
1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3
2.Estimated Scores
23. 3.Delivery
The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and work on reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help to eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.
4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could further develop the topic by providing more specific examples or elaborating on the reasons behind the woman's opinion. To improve topic development, the speaker should consider incorporating more details from the listening passage and expanding on the points made by the woman in the conversation.
5.Language UseOriginal: The university announced that the sculpture program will be eliminated due to the lack of student interest. Meanwhile, the department's only sculpture professor is retiring this year. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with the university's decision. Firstly, she thinks it's a big loss for the department. The main reason why students don't take this sculpture class is that they don't have enough time because there are so many other requirements. Actually, the requirement classes such as painting and drawing have taken up most of their time. They don't have enough time to take this option class. Secondly, the university can hire a part-time professor and many professors in the department have a secondary field. They can also teach sculpture.
Corrected: The university announced that the sculpture program will be eliminated due to thea lack of student interest(change "the" to "a" for a more natural-sounding statement). Meanwhile, the department's only sculpture professor is retiring this year. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with the university's decision(smooth transition). Firstly, she thinks it's a significant loss for the department(use "significant" instead of "big" for advanced vocabulary). The primary reason why students don't take these sculpture classes is that they lack sufficient time due to numerous other requirements(improve sentence structure and vocabulary). In fact, required courses such as painting and drawing consume most of their time(use "consume" instead of "have taken up" for advanced vocabulary). They don't have enough time to take this optional class. Secondly, the university could hire a part-time professor, as many professors in the department possess a secondary field(improve sentence structure and vocabulary). They could also teach sculpture.
Revised (140 words): The university announced that the sculpture program will be eliminated due to a lack of student interest. Meanwhile, the department's only sculpture professor is retiring this year. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with the university's decision. Firstly, she thinks it's a significant loss for the department. The primary reason why students don't take these sculpture classes is that they lack sufficient time due to numerous other requirements. In fact, required courses such as painting and drawing consume most of their time, leaving them unable to take this optional class. Secondly, the university could hire a part-time professor, as many professors in the department possess a secondary field. They could also teach sculpture, ensuring that students have access to diverse learning opportunities within the art department.
6.Mind Map
- University's decision
- Eliminate sculpture program
- Lack of student interest
- Retiring professor
- Woman's disagreement
- Significant loss for department
- Primary reason: lack of time
- Numerous other requirements
- Required courses consume time
- Alternative solutions
- Hire part-time professor
- Utilize professors with secondary fields in sculpture
7.Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| significant | sɪɡˈnɪfɪkənt | adjective | important and deserving attention; having a particular meaning | The woman believes that eliminating the sculpture program is a significant loss for the art department. |
| consume | kənˈsuːm | verb | to use up (time, resources, etc.) | Required courses, such as painting and drawing, consume most of the students' time. |
| optional | ˈɒpʃənəl | adjective | available as a choice but not required | Students don't have enough time to take optional classes like sculpture due to other requirements. |
| diverse | daɪˈvɜːs | adjective | showing a great deal of variety; including many different types | Hiring a part-time professor would ensure students have access to diverse learning opportunities. |
| alternative | ɔːlˈtɜːrnətɪv | adjective/noun | (of one or more things) available as another possibility or choice | The woman suggests alternative solutions, such as hiring a part-time professor or utilizing other faculty. |
18用户样本 #18
用户样本 #18
评估结果
1.Sub Scores
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Delivery: 3
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Topic Development: 4
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Language Use: 3
2.Estimated Scores
- Total Score: 26
3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there is room for improvement in pronunciation and reducing pauses. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and focus on improving pronunciation for better clarity.
4.Topic Development The topic development in the response is well-done. The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The woman's opinion and reasons are clearly stated and explained. No significant improvements are needed in this aspect.
5.Language UseOriginal: The university plans to discontinue sculpting classes. The university plans to discontinue sculpture courses. (Changed "sculpting classes" to "sculpture courses" for better vocabulary use) This is because there are too few majors that take sculpting classes. This is due to the low number of art majors enrolling in sculpture courses. (Rephrased for clarity and improved vocabulary) In addition, the sculpting professor has retired, and thus, because of the art department's limited budget, sculpting classes will be cancelled. However, the woman disagrees. She thinks that majors cannot take sculpting classes because there are too many other required classes. The university should instead implement different requirements for the art students, so they can take a larger variety of classes that they actually want. In addition, even though the sculpting professor is leaving, the classes can still be taught by other professors, as they have sculpting as a secondary field. These are the two reasons why the woman believes that sculpting classes should not be discontinued.
Revised (140 words):
The university plans to discontinue sculpture courses due to the low number of art majors enrolling in these courses. Additionally, with the retirement of the sculpture professor and the art department's limited budget, these courses will be canceled. However, the woman disagrees with this decision. She believes that art majors cannot enroll in sculpture courses because their schedules are filled with numerous required classes. She suggests that the university should revise its requirements for art students, allowing them to explore a wider variety of courses that align with their interests. Furthermore, despite the departure of the sculpture professor, other faculty members with expertise in sculpture could teach these courses as they possess secondary skills in this field. These reasons form the basis of the woman's argument against discontinuing sculpture courses at the university.
6.Mind Map
- University's plan
- Discontinue sculpture courses
- Low enrollment
- Sculpture professor retiring
- Limited budget
- Woman's disagreement
- Art majors' schedules filled with required classes
- Suggestion: revise requirements for art students
- Faculty members with secondary skills in sculpture
7.Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English Definition | English Translation | Sample Sentence |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Discontinue | /dɪsˈkɒntɪnju/ | Verb | To stop doing or providing something, especially something that has been done or provided for a long time. | Discontinue | The university plans to discontinue sculpture courses due to low enrollment. |
| Enrollment | /ɪnˈrəʊlmənt/ | Noun | The process of arranging to join a school, university, course, etc., or the number of people who do this. | Enrollment | Low enrollment in sculpture courses is one of the reasons for discontinuing them. |
| Requirements | /rɪˈkwaɪərmənts/ | Noun | Something that is needed or demanded. | Requirements | The woman suggests revising the requirements for art students to allow them to explore a wider variety of courses. |
| Faculty | /ˈfækəlti/ | Noun | A group of teachers in a college or university who teach a particular subject or group of subjects. | Faculty | Despite the departure of the sculpture professor, other faculty members with expertise in sculpture could teach these courses. |
| Secondary skills | /ˈsɛkəndəri skɪlz/ | Noun | Additional abilities or expertise that a person has, apart from their main area of specialization. | Secondary skills | The woman believes that faculty members with secondary skills in sculpture can continue teaching the courses even after the professor's retirement. |