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TOEFL TPO 69 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the announcement. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

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Graduate Study Lounge Now Open to All Students The university has decided to change its policy about Perkins Lounge. Previously, this study space was reserved for graduate students, but the university will now allow undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge as well. The Dean of Students explained: 'The space is underutilized right now—there aren't a lot of graduate students making use of it—so there's room to allow additional students.' She also noted that the university has a problem with insufficient study space for undergraduates, since undergraduate enrollment at the university has increased in the last few years.

题目

The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the announcement. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

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用户样本 #1

评估结果

1.Sub Scores

  • Delivery: 3

  • Topic Development: 3.5

  • Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

  • Total Score: 27

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and work on reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details about the woman's opinion and reasons for holding that opinion. To enhance topic development, the speaker should elaborate on the woman's suggestions for alternative study spaces for undergraduates and emphasize her concerns about maintaining a quiet environment for graduate students.

5.Language Use

The university announced that they will open the graduate lawngraduate study lounge to all students due to its low utilization and to provide more space for the undergraduate students. And the woman disagreed with this announcement because first she thinks that graduate students need quitequiet a space to think because they have a lot of research work to do. And a larger space provides them with more table and more spaces to do their research. And secondly, the woman suggests that to really handle the problem, the university should find some extra spaces for the undergraduate students. Like there is a new dormitory that is going to be used so the university could set up a learning space for the undergraduate students for them to study and leave the lawn placelounge for them.

("graduate lawn" was changed to "graduate study lounge" for accuracy; "quite" was corrected to "quiet" for proper word usage; "lawn place" was changed to "lounge" for consistency.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced its plan to open the graduate study lounge to all students, as it is currently underutilized and there is a need for more study space for undergraduates. The woman disagrees with this plan, stating that graduate students require a quiet environment for their research work, which is facilitated by having ample space and tables in the lounge. She believes that opening the lounge to undergraduates would compromise this environment. Instead, she suggests that the university should explore alternative solutions, such as designating additional study areas specifically for undergraduates. One example she provides is utilizing the new dormitory being built as a potential study space for undergraduates, thus preserving the graduate study lounge exclusively for graduate students.

6.Mind Map


- University Plan
  - Open graduate study lounge to all students
  - Reasons: underutilization, need for undergraduate study space

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with plan
  - Reasons: quiet environment needed for graduate research, ample space and tables

- Alternative Solutions
  - Designate additional study areas for undergraduates
  - Example: new dormitory as potential study space

7.Key Words

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish DefinitionEnglish TranslationSample Sentence
UnderutilizedˌʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzdAdjectiveNot used to the fullest extent or potentialNot fully usedThe woman believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates would not solve the underutilized issue.
DesignateˈdɛzɪɡneɪtVerbTo assign or appoint someone or something to a specific role or purposeAssign, appointThe university should designate additional study areas specifically for undergraduate students.
Dormitoryˈdɔːrmɪtəri, ˈdɔːrmɪtriNounA large bedroom for a number of people in a school or institution, typically one at a university or collegeShared living quarters, residence hallThe woman suggests using the new dormitory as a potential study space for undergraduates.
PreserveprɪˈzɜrvVerbTo maintain (something) in its original state or condition, typically in order to prevent it from being lost, damaged, or changedMaintain, protectPreserving the graduate study lounge exclusively for graduate students would ensure a quiet environment for their research.
AmpleˈæmplAdjectiveEnough or more than enough; plentifulSufficient, abundantThe graduate study lounge provides ample space and tables for graduate students to work on their research projects.
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用户样本 #2

分数
19

评估结果

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在表达方面,发言者的语速和发音需要改进。有时候,发言者在句子中的停顿不太合适,导致语句听起来不够流畅。此外,发言者需要注意正确的发音,以避免拼写错误。建议发言者多练习发音和语速控制,以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面,发言者对于阅读和听力材料的总结较为简略,没有充分展示对材料的理解。建议发言者在回答问题时更加详细地概括阅读和听力材料,并给出更多支持或例子来说明女士对计划的看法及其原因。同时,在组织回答时要注意逻辑性和连贯性,使回答更加清晰易懂。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the university has decided to change the policy about parking lounge to let the undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge. The university has decided to change the policy about Perkins Lounge, allowing undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge.(将“parking lounge”改为“Perkins Lounge”,并调整句子结构使其更自然。)

First off, the university thinks that they can let all the students to use in this study lounge because they have some spare room for undergraduate students. Firstly, the university believes that they can accommodate all students in this study lounge because there is extra space for undergraduate students.(调整句子结构,使其更自然。)

Besides, the undergraduate students have insufficient room for studying, so they had to find some new places for studying. Moreover, undergraduate students lack adequate study space, so they need to find additional places for studying.(使用更高级的词汇,并调整句子结构。)

And in the conversation, the woman doesn't like this idea because she says that she wants some place to spread their books, but the study lounge for graduate students is too noisy and crowded. In the conversation, the woman dislikes this idea because she wants a place to spread out her books; however, she believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates will make it noisy and crowded.(调整句子结构,使其更自然。)

Besides, the woman points that she needs a diagnosed place like dormitory for studying. Furthermore, the woman suggests that a designated space, such as a dormitory, should be provided for studying.(将“diagnosed”改为“designated”,并调整句子结构。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has decided to change the policy about Perkins Lounge, allowing undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge. Firstly, the university believes that they can accommodate all students in this study lounge because there is extra space for undergraduate students. Moreover, undergraduate students lack adequate study space, so they need to find additional places for studying. In the conversation, the woman dislikes this idea because she wants a place to spread out her books; however, she believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates will make it noisy and crowded. Furthermore, the woman suggests that a designated space, such as a dormitory, should be provided for studying. This would address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates while maintaining a quiet and less crowded environment for graduate students in Perkins Lounge.

6.思维导图

  • University policy change

    • Perkins Lounge
    • Allowing undergraduates
  • Reasons for change

    • Extra space available
    • Insufficient study space for undergraduates
  • Woman's opinion

    • Dislikes the idea
    • Quiet and less crowded environment needed
  • Suggestion

    • Designated study space (e.g., dormitory)

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
accommodate/əˈkɒmədeɪt/verbto provide enough space or room for提供足够的空间The university should accommodate both graduate and undergraduate students in separate study spaces.
insufficient/ˌɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/adjectivenot enough; inadequate不足的,不够的The insufficient study space for undergraduates has led to overcrowding in the library.
designated/ˈdezɪɡneɪtɪd/adjectiveofficially chosen for a particular purpose指定的,特定的The designated study area in the dormitory provides a quiet environment for students to focus on their work.
overcrowded/ˌəʊvərˈkraʊdɪd/adjectivefilled with too many people or things过于拥挤的Opening the graduate lounge to undergraduates may result in an overcrowded and noisy environment.
maintain/meɪnˈteɪn/verbto continue to have; to keep in existence保持,维持It is important to maintain a balance between providing study spaces and preserving a quiet atmosphere.
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用户样本 #3

评估结果

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation problems that result from inappropriate pauses. To improve the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper punctuation and phrasing to avoid awkward pauses. Additionally, working on accurate pronunciation of words can help eliminate spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. The speaker should focus on providing more specific details from the listening passage to support their points. Additionally, the speaker could work on paraphrasing the information from the reading and listening passages more effectively to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

5.Language Use

The article announces a change in the campus university policy, which the principal Dean of Students is going to let the ungraduates undergraduates use graduate study log Perkins Lounge, a graduate study space. However, the woman in the lecture disagrees with this announcement. She goes on to say that the graduate study log lounge is a quiet place for the graduate to study, which they can spread books on the table. It is especially good for researching projects. Furthermore, it is not a noisy place for them to study. Also, she talks about that when the ungraduate undergraduate doesn't have much space to study, she suggests that the principal to make more extra place for them to study. Also, she suggests that the principal can make another building for them to study.

(Changed "campus" to "university policy" for clarity; changed "principal" to "Dean of Students" as mentioned in the reading passage; changed "ungraduates" to "undergraduates" for correct spelling; changed "graduate study log" to "Perkins Lounge, a graduate study space" for accuracy and clarity; changed "log" to "lounge" for correct terminology; changed "ungraduate" to "undergraduate" for correct spelling.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The article announces a change in the university policy, in which the Dean of Students plans to allow undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge, a graduate study space. However, the woman in the lecture disagrees with this announcement. She argues that the graduate study lounge is a quiet place for graduate students to study, where they can spread out their books on the table and work on research projects. Furthermore, it is not a noisy environment for them to concentrate. She also mentions that when undergraduates lack sufficient study space, she suggests that the university should create additional spaces specifically for them. For instance, she proposes that the university could include a study area in the new dormitory being built, allowing Perkins Lounge to remain exclusive for graduate students.

6.Mind Map


- University policy change
  - Perkins Lounge
    - Graduate study space
    - Open to undergraduates

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagreement
  - Reasons
    - Quiet environment for graduate students
    - Spacious for research projects

- Suggestion for undergraduates
  - Create additional study spaces
  - Example: New dormitory study area

7.Key Words

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish DefinitionEnglish TranslationSample Sentence
Underutilized/ˌʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzd/AdjectiveNot used to the best or fullest extentUnderusedThe woman believes that the underutilized Perkins Lounge should remain exclusive to graduate students for their research.
Insufficient/ˌɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/AdjectiveNot enough; inadequateNot enoughThe woman acknowledges the insufficient study space for undergraduates but suggests alternative solutions.
Designate/ˈdɛzɪɡneɪt/VerbTo assign or set apart for a particular purposeAssignShe proposes that the university should designate additional study areas specifically for undergraduates.
Dormitory/dɔrˈmɪtəri/NounA large bedroom for a number of people, typically in a school or institutionDormThe woman suggests adding a study space in the new dormitory being built for undergraduate students.
Exclusive/ɪkˈskluːsɪv/AdjectiveRestricted or limited to the person, group, or area concernedRestrictedThe woman argues that Perkins Lounge should remain exclusive for graduate students to maintain its quiet and spacious environment.
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用户样本 #4

分数
23

评估结果

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看,发言者的语速较为稳定,但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿,以提高语言流畅度。此外,发言者需要注意准确发音,以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The speaker provided a coherent response, summarizing the plan and stating the woman's opinion. However, the response could be better organized by clearly separating the summary of the plan and the woman's opinion, as well as providing more specific examples from the listening material to support her opinion. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on creating a clear structure and incorporating more details from the listening material to strengthen their argument.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, there is a proposal that the school should open the lounge room for all students for the reason that there are also lots of graduate students learn in that room and there is no sufficient room for undergraduate students to study. The university has proposed opening the lounge room to all students because it is underutilized by graduate students, and there isn't enough study space for undergraduates. (修改了句子结构,使表达更清晰) However, in the listing material, the women hold a negative opinion about this proposal for the reason that, first of all, it is a quiet space for the graduate students to do some research. In the listening material, the woman expresses her disagreement with this plan because it provides a quiet space for graduate students to conduct research. (修改了句子结构和词汇,使表达更自然) They can do the research here, don't worry, don't need to worry to be disturbed. They can work without worrying about being disturbed. (简化了表达,使语言更流畅) And if the undergraduate students are allowed, it's not a good thing for the graduate students. Allowing undergraduates would negatively impact graduate students. (简化了表达,使语言更流畅) Another reason is that the school should explore another space for the undergraduate students such as the dormitory for them to learn. She also suggests that the university should find alternative spaces for undergraduates, like study areas in dormitories. (修改了句子结构,使表达更清晰)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university has proposed opening the lounge room to all students because it is underutilized by graduate students, and there isn't enough study space for undergraduates. In the listening material, the woman expresses her disagreement with this plan because it provides a quiet space for graduate students to conduct research. They can work without worrying about being disturbed. Allowing undergraduates would negatively impact graduate students. She also suggests that the university should find alternative spaces for undergraduates, like study areas in dormitories. This would help address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates without disrupting the quiet environment that graduate students currently enjoy in Perkins Lounge. Overall, the woman believes that maintaining a separate study area for graduate students is essential and that other solutions should be explored to accommodate undergraduate needs.

6.思维导图


- University Proposal
  - Open lounge room to all students
  - Underutilized by graduate students
  - Insufficient study space for undergraduates

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagreement with the plan
  - Quiet space for graduate research
  - Negative impact on graduate students

- Alternative Solution
  - Find other spaces for undergraduates
  - Study areas in dormitories
  - Address study space issue without disrupting graduate students

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
underutilized/ˌʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzd/adjectivenot used to its full potential or capacity没有充分利用的The underutilized study lounge could be better managed by finding alternative solutions for undergraduates.
insufficient/ˌɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/adjectivenot enough; inadequate不足的,不够的The insufficient study space for undergraduates has led to the proposal of opening the lounge room to all students.
disrupt/dɪsˈrʌpt/verbto interrupt or disturb something打扰,中断Allowing undergraduates in the lounge room would disrupt the quiet environment needed by graduate students.
accommodate/əˈkɒmədeɪt/verbto provide space or facilities for someone or something容纳,提供空间The university should explore other options to accommodate the study needs of undergraduate students.
dormitory/ˈdɔːrmɪtəri/nouna building with rooms for students to live in, usually on a college or university campus宿舍,学生宿舍The woman suggests adding study areas in dormitories as an alternative solution for undergraduate students.
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用户样本 #5

分数
23

评估结果

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看,这个回答的语速较为稳定,但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高口语表达能力,建议在练习时注意保持流畅的语速,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看,回答内容基本上符合题目要求,但在组织结构和内容支持方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意明确地陈述观点,并提供充分的理由或例子来支持观点。此外,尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加连贯和有条理。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university plans to open graduate study lounge to all students, which is disagreed by the woman in the listening. The university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students, a decision that the woman in the listening disagrees with. (添加了定冠词,调整了句子结构使其更自然)

Firstly, she thinks in such condition it's pretty perfect for graduate students since it is very quiet so they can just spread their book on the desks, especially during the research project. Firstly, she believes that under such conditions, it's ideal for graduate students because it is very quiet, allowing them to spread their books on the desks, especially during research projects. (调整了句子结构,使其更自然流畅;使用了更高级的词汇)

Secondly, she thinks since graduate students are pretty busy, so they can avoid noises and crowded in such condition. Secondly, she thinks that since graduate students are quite busy, they can avoid noise and crowdedness in such an environment. (调整了句子结构,使其更自然流畅;使用了更高级的词汇)

What is also mentioned is that undergraduate students don't have sufficient room to study. Well, even though that is true, as the woman says, there are room in the new dormitory which can be assigned by the university and just leave space to graduate students. It is also mentioned that undergraduate students don't have sufficient study space. However, even though that is true, as the woman suggests, there is room in the new dormitory that can be designated by the university, leaving the lounge exclusively for graduate students. (调整了句子结构,使其更自然流畅;使用了更高级的词汇)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students, a decision that the woman in the listening disagrees with. Firstly, she believes that under such conditions, it's ideal for graduate students because it is very quiet, allowing them to spread their books on the desks, especially during research projects. Secondly, she thinks that since graduate students are quite busy, they can avoid noise and crowdedness in such an environment. It is also mentioned that undergraduate students don't have sufficient study space. However, even though that is true, as the woman suggests, there is room in the new dormitory that can be designated by the university, leaving the lounge exclusively for graduate students.

6.思维导图


- University's Plan
  - Open graduate study lounge to all students

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Quiet environment for graduate students
      - Spread books on desks during research projects
    - Avoid noise and crowdedness for busy graduate students
  - Suggestion
    - Designate room in new dormitory for undergraduates
    - Keep lounge exclusive for graduate students

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
Underutilized/ˌʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzd/adjectiveNot used to its full potential or capacity未充分利用的The woman believes that the underutilized study lounge should remain exclusive to graduate students.
Designate/ˈdɛzɪɡneɪt/verbTo assign or set apart for a specific purpose指定,选定The university should designate a study space in the new dormitory for undergraduate students.
Exclusive/ɪkˈskluːsɪv/adjectiveRestricted or limited to a particular group or individual独有的,专用的The woman suggests keeping the study lounge exclusive for graduate students to maintain a quiet environment.
Crowdedness/ˈkraʊdɪdnəs/nounThe state of being filled with people or things, leaving little or no room for movement拥挤The woman wants to avoid the crowdedness that might occur if the lounge is opened to all students.
Dormitory/ˈdɔːrmɪtəri/nounA large room or building with many beds, used for sleeping, especially in educational institutions宿舍The woman proposes using a room in the new dormitory as a study space for undergraduate students.
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用户样本 #6

分数
23

评估结果

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看,回答中的语音清晰,流利度较好,但有时会出现停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速,尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意发音准确性,以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看,回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而,在总结计划时应更明确地指出这是关于Perkins Lounge的政策变更。此外,在解释女士观点时,可以更详细地描述她提到的其他解决方案(例如,在新宿舍建设学习空间)。在练习时,请注意提供充足的支持或例子,并确保回答中的观点之间有明确的联系。

5.语言使用

Original: The university decided the graduate study lounge not open to all students because there are just a few undergraduate students in there, and besides, there is insufficient study space for undergraduate students. The woman disliked the university's decision and she thinks it's very disappointing. Firstly, she argues that it's a nice and quiet place to allow students to think and read, and they can just sparkle books in desks. But after this announcement there, they cannot do that. And besides, she thinks there is another way can solve this problem. The university should build extra space for undergraduate students, like open new auditorium or other buildings.

Corrected: The university decided the to make the graduate study lounge not open to all students because there are just a few undergraduate students in there, and besides, there is insufficient study space for undergraduate students. The woman disliked the university's decision and she thinks it's very disappointing. Firstly, she argues that it's a nice and quiet place to allow students to think and read, and they can just sparkle spread books in on desks. But after this announcement there,, they cannot do that. And besides, she thinks there is another way can to solve this problem. The university should build extra space for undergraduate students, like open opening a new auditorium or other buildings.

(将“the”改为“to make the”,使句子更自然;去掉“not”,使句子表达正确;将“sparkle”改为“spread”,使句子意义明确;将“in”改为“on”,使句子表达正确;去掉“there,”,使句子更流畅;将“can”改为“to”,使句子结构正确;将“open”改为“opening a”,使句子更自然。)

Revised (140 words): The university decided to make the graduate study lounge open to all students due to the limited number of undergraduate students using it and the insufficient study space available for them. The woman disagrees with the university's decision, finding it disappointing. She believes that the lounge's quiet and peaceful atmosphere allows students to concentrate and read, and they can easily spread their books on desks. However, after this announcement, they will no longer have this privilege. Furthermore, she suggests that there is an alternative solution to address this issue. The university should create additional study spaces specifically for undergraduate students, such as opening a new auditorium or constructing other buildings dedicated to studying. This way, the graduate study lounge can remain exclusive for graduate students while still addressing the needs of undergraduates.

6.思维导图

  • University decision

    • Open graduate study lounge to all students
    • Limited undergraduate students using it
    • Insufficient study space for undergraduates
  • Woman's opinion

    • Disagrees with the decision
    • Disappointing
  • Reasons for disagreement

    • Quiet and peaceful atmosphere
    • Spreading books on desks
  • Alternative solution

    • Create additional study spaces for undergraduates
    • Opening a new auditorium or constructing other buildings

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
Underutilized/ʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzd/adjectiveNot used to the best or fullest extent possible使用不足的The underutilized study lounge could be better utilized by opening it to undergraduate students.
Insufficient/ɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/adjectiveNot enough; inadequate不足的The insufficient study space for undergraduates has led to the university's decision.
Atmosphere/ˈætməsfɪr/nounThe pervading tone or mood of a place or situation氛围The quiet atmosphere in the lounge is essential for graduate students to concentrate on their work.
Exclusive/ɪkˈskluːsɪv/adjectiveRestricted or limited to the person or group独有的,专用的The woman believes that the graduate study lounge should remain exclusive for graduate students.
Construct/kənˈstrʌkt/verbTo build or form by putting together parts建造,构建The university should construct new buildings to provide more study spaces for undergraduate students.
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用户样本 #7

分数
23

评估结果

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中,发音大部分清晰,但有时会出现停顿。为了提高发音的准确性和流利度,请注意练习连贯地表达观点,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外,注意正确发音单词,以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response provides a summary of the plan and the woman's opinion, but it could be better organized and more coherent. To improve topic development, try to structure your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. In the introduction, briefly mention the plan and the woman's opinion. In the body, elaborate on the reasons she gives for her opinion, making sure to connect them back to her main argument. Finally, in the conclusion, restate her opinion and summarize her reasons. This will help create a more organized and coherent response.

5.语言使用

Original: The university decided to allow undergraduate students to use parking Perkins lounge because the space is underutilized and secondly, the university has a problem with insufficient study place for undergraduate students. However, in the conversation, the woman disagreed with these decisions. First, she points out that the graduate students will lose this quiet space where they can spread books when doing research books. And as graduate students, they have a lot of work to do. So this place would be noisy, crowded and not suitable for them. Secondly, the woman said that the school could address the insufficient study place by some extra space specifically for undergraduate students, such as in the new dormitories, they can set some study place for undergraduate students. So that's the reason why she disagreed with this decision.

(将“parking”改为“Perkins”,因为原文中提到的是Perkins Lounge。)

Revised (140 words):

The university decided to allow undergraduate students to use Perkins Lounge because it is underutilized and there is an insufficient amount of study space for undergraduates. However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this decision. Firstly, she points out that graduate students will lose their quiet space where they can spread out their books while working on research projects. As graduate students have a significant workload, having a peaceful and uncrowded area is essential for them. Secondly, she suggests that the university could address the issue of insufficient study spaces by designating extra areas specifically for undergraduate students, such as creating study spaces in new dormitories. This way, Perkins Lounge could remain exclusive to graduate students. These reasons explain why she disagrees with the university's decision to open Perkins Lounge to undergraduates.

6.思维导图


- Introduction
  - University's decision
  - Woman's disagreement

- Reason 1
  - Graduate students losing quiet space
  - Importance of peaceful area for research

- Reason 2
  - Alternative solution: extra spaces for undergraduates
  - Example: new dormitories

- Conclusion
  - Summary of woman's opinion and reasons

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
underutilized/ˌʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzd/adjectivenot used to the full potential or capacity没有充分利用的The woman believes that the underutilized Perkins Lounge should remain exclusive to graduate students.
insufficient/ˌɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/adjectivenot enough; inadequate不足的,不够的She thinks that the university should address the insufficient study spaces for undergraduate students.
designate/ˈdɛzɪɡneɪt/verbto assign or allocate a particular purpose指定,选定The woman suggests designating extra study spaces specifically for undergraduate students.
dormitory/ˈdɔrmətɔri/nouna building with rooms for students to live宿舍She proposes creating study spaces in new dormitories as an alternative solution.
exclusive/ɪkˈskluːsɪv/adjectiverestricted or limited to certain people专用的,独有的The woman wants Perkins Lounge to remain exclusive to graduate students for a quiet study environment.
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用户样本 #8

分数
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评估结果

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说,发言者的表达较为清晰,但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性,建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于计划的总结和女士的观点表述得较为清楚,但在解释女士观点原因时,可以进一步完善。例如,在提到女士认为研究生需要一个安静、不拥挤的空间时,可以补充她担心开放给本科生后这种环境将受到影响。此外,在提到学校应该为本科生指定额外的学习空间时,可以详细说明女士提出的建议,如在新宿舍中增设学习空间。总之,在话题发展方面,建议发言者在解释观点原因时更加具体和详细。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, in the latter, the school decided to add more study space where it is initially used by graduate students, but the women feel a little disappointed about this idea. In the announcement, the university plans to open the graduate study lounge to undergraduates as well, but the woman feels disappointed about this decision.(在原文中,应使用“announcement”而不是“latter”,并将“the women”改为“the woman”。此外,为了使句子更自然,可以使用“feels disappointed about this decision”替换“feel a little disappointed about this idea”。)

First off, she thinks that graduate students should have a space to do a lot of work and research, like writing the books on the desk, and they need a place that won't be noisy and crowded. Firstly, she believes that graduate students should have a dedicated space for extensive work and research, such as having ample room for their books on desks, and they require an environment that is quiet and not crowded.(为了使句子更自然,可以使用“believes”替换“thinks”,并将“a lot of work”改为“extensive work”。同时,将“writing the books on the desk”改为“having ample room for their books on desks”,并将“won't be noisy and crowded”改为“is quiet and not crowded”。)

This is because it's good for graduate students to concentrate on themselves, and the school should add other space from other places to study. This is because such an environment allows graduate students to focus better, and the university should allocate additional study spaces elsewhere for undergraduates.(为了使句子更自然,可以将“concentrate on themselves”改为“focus better”,并将“add other space from other places to study”改为“allocate additional study spaces elsewhere for undergraduates”。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the announcement, the university plans to open the graduate study lounge to undergraduates as well, but the woman feels disappointed about this decision. Firstly, she believes that graduate students should have a dedicated space for extensive work and research, such as having ample room for their books on desks, and they require an environment that is quiet and not crowded. This is because such an environment allows graduate students to focus better. She also suggests that the university should allocate additional study spaces elsewhere for undergraduates, like in the new dormitory being built. By doing so, it would address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates without affecting the graduate students' preferred study environment.

6.思维导图

  • Announcement

    • Open graduate study lounge to undergraduates
  • Woman's opinion

    • Disappointed
  • Reasons

    • Dedicated space for graduate students
      • Extensive work and research
      • Quiet and not crowded environment
    • University should allocate additional study spaces elsewhere for undergraduates

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
underutilized/ˌʌndərˈjuːtɪlaɪzd/adjectiveNot used to the full potential or extent未充分利用的The woman believes that the underutilized graduate study lounge should remain exclusive to graduate students.
allocate/ˈæləkeɪt/verbTo distribute resources or duties分配The university should allocate additional study spaces for undergraduates in the new dormitory.
extensive/ɪkˈstensɪv/adjectiveLarge in amount, range, or degree广泛的,大量的Graduate students require a dedicated space for extensive work and research.
insufficient/ˌɪnsəˈfɪʃənt/adjectiveNot enough; inadequate不足的,不够的The woman thinks that opening the lounge to undergraduates is not a proper solution to insufficient study space.
dormitory/ˈdɔrmətɔri/nounA building for housing students宿舍The woman suggests adding a study space for undergraduates in the new dormitory being built.
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用户样本 #9

分数
26

评估结果

1.子项得分

  • 交付(Delivery):3

  • 主题发展(Topic Development):3.5

  • 语言使用(Language Use):3

2.预估分数

  • 总分:26

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速较为清晰和流畅,但偶尔会有停顿。建议在练习时注意掌握适当的停顿,以提高语言表达的连贯性。同时,注意纠正发音错误,以免影响听众理解。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求,能够简要概括计划,并说明女士对计划的看法及原因。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化,例如在提到女士的观点时,可以更明确地指出她反对这个计划。此外,在给出女士建议时,可以更详细地描述她提出的替代方案。总体来说,需要在组织结构和论据方面进行一些改进,以使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文:The announcement is about a change of the policy in a study lunch, The announcement is about a change in the policy of a study lounge,(将“a change of”改为“a change in”,将“study lunch”改为“study lounge”,使句子更自然。)which was reserved only for graduate students, but now it is also available for additional undergraduate students. which was previously reserved only for graduate students, but now it has been opened to undergraduate students as well.(在描述计划变化时,使用更准确的词汇和表达。)

This is mainly because the enrollment of undergraduate students has started to increase for the last few years. This is mainly due to the increasing enrollment of undergraduate students over the past few years.(将“has started to increase for the last few years”改为“over the past few years”,使句子更自然。)

However, in a conversation, the woman disagreed with the announcement because of two main reasons. However, during the conversation, the woman expressed her disagreement with the announcement for two main reasons.(将“in a conversation”改为“during the conversation”,使句子更自然。)

The study lunch can be not perfect anymore because there are more students, The study lounge may no longer be ideal due to an increased number of students,(将“can be not perfect anymore”改为“may no longer be ideal”,使句子更自然。)

so less rooms can be used for the graduate students to spread their book out for doing some research. thus reducing the space available for graduate students to spread out their books and conduct research.(将“less rooms can be used”改为“reducing the space available”,使句子更自然。)

In addition, the study lunch will be noisy and crowded, Additionally, the study lounge may become noisy and crowded,(将“In addition”改为“Additionally”,使句子更自然。)

so the woman suggests that the university should use the spare areas in the dormitory as study rooms for undergraduate students. so the woman suggests that the university should designate spare areas in the dormitory as study spaces specifically for undergraduate students.(将“use”改为“designate”,使句子更自然。)

修订后的回答(140词):

The announcement is about a change in the policy of a study lounge, which was previously reserved only for graduate students, but now it has been opened to undergraduate students as well. This is mainly due to the increasing enrollment of undergraduate students over the past few years. However, during the conversation, the woman expressed her disagreement with the announcement for two main reasons. The study lounge may no longer be ideal due to an increased number of students, thus reducing the space available for graduate students to spread out their books and conduct research. Additionally, the study lounge may become noisy and crowded, so the woman suggests that the university should designate spare areas in the dormitory as study spaces specifically for undergraduate students.

6.思维导图


- Announcement
  - Change in policy
  - Study lounge
  - Open to undergraduate students

- Reason for change
  - Increasing enrollment of undergraduate students

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagreement with the announcement
  - Reasons for disagreement
    - Reduced space for graduate students' research
    - Noisy and crowded study lounge

- Woman's suggestion
  - Designate spare areas in dormitory as study spaces for undergraduate students

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
Underutilized/ʌndərˈjutəlaɪzd/adjectiveNot used to its full potential or capacity.未充分利用的The underutilized study lounge should be designated for specific student groups to maximize its potential.
Designate/ˈdɛzɪɡneɪt/verbTo assign or set apart for a particular purpose.指定,选定The university should designate separate study areas for undergraduate and graduate students.
Dormitory/ˈdɔrmətɔri/nounA building with rooms for residents, especially students at a college or university.宿舍The new dormitory should include study spaces to accommodate the increasing number of undergraduate students.
Enrollment/ɪnˈroʊlmənt/nounThe process of enrolling or being enrolled in a school, program, or course.注册,入学The university has seen a significant increase in undergraduate enrollment over the past few years.
Conduct/kənˈdʌkt/verbTo organize and carry out a particular activity.进行,实施Graduate students need quiet spaces to conduct their research projects effectively.
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