TOEFL TPO 12 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman supports the proposal described in the article. Explain why she thinks it will achieve the university’s goals.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 17

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议发言者练习更清晰、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker's response lacks coherence and organization. The answer does not accurately reflect the content of the reading and listening passages, and some parts are difficult to understand. To improve, the speaker should focus on clearly summarizing the main points from both the reading and listening passages, and then explain how these points support the woman's opinion on the proposal. Additionally, providing specific examples from the passages will help strengthen the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school is 90 feet and the video stations are touching the edge. The university plans to expand the college radio station's broadcasting range. (原文中提到的是大学广播电台的扩展，而不是学校的尺寸和视频站。) What she believes is that staff will be through the survival shock as they have job opportunities. She believes that students will gain more professional experience and better job opportunities after graduation. (原文中女生讨论的是学生获得更多的专业经验和毕业后的就业机会，而不是员工。) This is because this proposal does not sell to her program. This is because the proposal will provide a larger, real-life audience for students to experiment with programming. (原文中提到的是提案将为学生提供更大、真实的受众，而不是销售给她的项目。) Therefore, if you are interested in a professional challenge, I recommend this program for a much larger. Second, she thinks that the whole reason is because they are making a lot of money out of commercials. As a result, the news is conducive to offer more scholarships and help fund projects of other programs. Thank you for watching.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman supports the proposal to expand the college radio station's broadcasting range because she believes it will achieve the university's goals. She thinks that students will gain more professional experience by experimenting with programming for a larger, real-life audience, which will ultimately lead to better job opportunities after graduation. Additionally, she believes that the expanded radio station will attract more listeners and generate revenue through commercials. This extra income can be used to offer more scholarships and fund projects for other programs at the university. Overall, the woman is confident that the proposal will not only benefit the communication program but also contribute to the overall success of the university.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Expand college radio station's broadcasting range

• Woman's support

  • Professional experience for students
    • Larger, real-life audience
    • Better job opportunities after graduation
  • Attract more listeners
    • Generate revenue through commercials
      • Offer more scholarships
      • Fund projects for other programs

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some instances where the speaker could improve their pronunciation to avoid confusion. For example, "pro-videos" should be "provide those." To improve, the speaker should practice enunciating words more clearly and work on their pronunciation of specific words.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully addressing the woman's reasons for supporting the proposal. The speaker could have mentioned the woman's friend Tony and his university's successful experience with a similar plan as additional evidence. To improve, the speaker should ensure they include all relevant information from the listening passage to strengthen their response.

5.Language Use

The university planss to expand their boardingbroadcasting range to attract more students and to make more benefits(change "benefits" to "revenue"). And the women agree with this plan for many aspects. First, I think this expanded range will mean more programs will be played on the radio. And this will give students more chance(change "chance" to "opportunities") to practice their skills. And they will do more real-life programs, pro-videos(change "pro-videos" to "providing"). And second, this will make more money and this money will enhance the development of the university. And they can use this money to help other programs.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to expand their broadcasting range in order to attract more students and generate additional revenue. The woman supports this plan for several reasons. Firstly, she believes that the expanded range will result in a greater variety of programs being aired on the radio, providing students with increased opportunities to practice and develop their skills. By working on real-life programs, students can gain valuable experience that will improve their chances of securing employment after graduation. Secondly, the woman argues that the increased revenue generated by the expanded radio station can be used to support the development of other university programs and initiatives. Overall, she is confident that the proposed changes will help achieve the university's goals and benefit both the students and the institution as a whole.

6.Mind Map

- University plans
  - Expand broadcasting range
  - Attract more students
  - Generate additional revenue

- Woman's support
  - Increased variety of programs
    - More opportunities for students
    - Real-life experience
  - Revenue benefits
    - Support other university programs
    - Enhance overall development

- Conclusion
  - Achieve university's goals
  - Benefit students and institution

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 从表达方面来看，回答的语音清晰，流利度较好，但有时停顿不太合适。建议在练习时注意语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively explains the woman's support for the proposal, mentioning the benefits of real-life experience for students and the potential financial benefits for the university. No significant improvements are needed in topic development.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the announcement, the university is planning to expand the broadcasting range of the radio station to nearby towns. In the announcement, it is mentioned that the university plans to extend the radio station's broadcasting range to encompass nearby towns. (将句子改为更自然的表达方式) And the woman in the conversation agrees with this plan. The woman in the conversation supports this plan. (简化表达，使其更自然) In the first place, she contends that there will be more programs relevant to the real life, Firstly, she argues that there will be more programs related to real-life situations, (使用更恰当的词汇和表达) which means that the students will have to face the real-life audience, meaning that students will engage with a real-life audience, (简化表达，使其更自然) and this experience will be a good shot for their future job hunting. and this experience will greatly benefit their future job prospects. (使用更准确的词汇和表达) Secondly, she believes that it will benefit the whole college. Secondly, she believes that it will benefit the entire university. (使用更准确的词汇) According to her friend Tony, there is another university which has done this issue five years ago, According to her friend Tony, another university implemented a similar plan five years ago, (使用更恰当的词汇和表达) and they have earned a lot of money, and they have generated significant revenue, (使用更准确的词汇) and they use this money to facilitate other programs. which they use to support other programs. (简化表达，使其更自然)

Revised Answer (140 words): In the announcement, it is mentioned that the university plans to extend the radio station's broadcasting range to encompass nearby towns. The woman in the conversation supports this plan. Firstly, she argues that there will be more programs related to real-life situations, meaning that students will engage with a real-life audience, and this experience will greatly benefit their future job prospects. Secondly, she believes that it will benefit the entire university. According to her friend Tony, another university implemented a similar plan five years ago, and they have generated significant revenue, which they use to support other programs.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - Extend broadcasting range

- Woman's support
  - Real-life experience
    - Engage with real-life audience
    - Benefit future job prospects
  - Benefit entire university
    - Tony's example
      - Implemented similar plan
      - Generated significant revenue
      - Support other programs

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 4

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 26

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper pauses and work on accurate pronunciation of certain words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively explains the woman's support for the proposal and provides relevant examples from the conversation. No significant improvements are needed in this aspect, as the topic development is strong.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: The college plans to expand the radio station's broadcasting range in order to attract more students to apply its to its (added "to" for correct preposition usage) communication program. Meanwhile, university officials hope this expansion can increase the number of listeners, which will create extra revenue for the university. Actually, the Women woman (corrected spelling error) in Conversation approves the policy. Firstly, if the university decides to expand the radio station, there will be more programs, so the students who participate in its program can obtain more professional experience. And these experiences are really useful for them to get a good job after they graduate. Secondly, the woman's friend Tony said that his university had a similar program five years ago, which made a lot of money. And the university used this money to offer more scholarships and found meaningful programs.

Revised Answer (140 words): The college plans to expand the radio station's broadcasting range to attract more students to apply to its communication program. University officials believe this expansion will increase listener numbers and generate additional revenue. The woman in the conversation supports this proposal for two main reasons. First, expanding the radio station will provide students with more programs and opportunities to gain valuable professional experience, enhancing their job prospects upon graduation. Second, she cites her friend Tony's experience at another university that implemented a similar expansion five years ago. This initiative proved successful, generating significant revenue that was used to fund scholarships and establish meaningful programs across campus. Overall, she believes that expanding the radio station will achieve the university's goals and benefit both students and the institution as a whole.

6.Mind Map

- College radio station expansion
  - Attract more students to communication program
  - Increase listener numbers
  - Generate additional revenue

- Woman's support
  - More programs and professional experience for students
    - Enhanced job prospects after graduation
  - Friend Tony's experience at another university
    - Successful expansion and revenue generation
    - Funding scholarships and meaningful programs across campus

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达基本清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。例如，可以尝试减少一些不必要的词汇，如“moreover”和“and”。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。为了提高口语表达能力，可以多加练习和模仿地道的英语发音。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在提到扩大广播范围对学生的好处时，可以更具体地说明这将如何帮助他们获得更多的专业经验。另外，在谈到托尼的大学例子时，可以更详细地描述他们是如何成功地增加收入并用于资助项目的。总体来说，在回答中加入更多具体细节和例子将使话题发展得更好。

5.语言使用

原文：The university decided to expand the range of the radio station to attract more students to apply for their radio programming. The university plans to expand the radio station's range to attract more students to its communication program.（将“apply for their radio programming”修改为“its communication program”，使句子更准确。）

Moreover, the expansion may increase the university's revenue. Additionally, the expansion could boost the university's revenue.（用“Additionally”替换“Moreover”，用“could boost”替换“may increase”，使句子更自然。）

The woman supports the proposal because she thinks that it will help students to gain some professional experience and it will help them have a better shot when they decide to find a job. The woman supports the proposal as she believes it will provide students with professional experience and improve their job prospects after graduation.（将原句改为更简洁、自然的表达。）

Moreover, her friend Tony's university also did the same thing and it does increase the university's revenue. Furthermore, her friend Tony's university implemented a similar plan, which successfully increased its revenue.（用“Furthermore”替换“Moreover”，并调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Their university used the revenue to give students scholarships and fund more programs. That university utilized the additional revenue to offer scholarships and support other programs.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to expand the radio station's range to attract more students to its communication program. Additionally, the expansion could boost the university's revenue. The woman supports the proposal as she believes it will provide students with professional experience and improve their job prospects after graduation. Furthermore, her friend Tony's university implemented a similar plan, which successfully increased its revenue. That university utilized the additional revenue to offer scholarships and support other programs.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Expand radio station's range
  • Attract more students to communication program
  • Increase revenue

• Woman's Support

  • Professional experience for students
  • Improved job prospects after graduation

• Tony's University Example

  • Similar plan implemented
  • Successful increase in revenue
  • Utilized revenue for scholarships and other programs

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确性，避免因发音错误导致的拼写错误。同时，尽量减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现较好，能够清楚地阐述女生支持提议的原因，并给出了合理的例子。但在组织结构上还有待加强，建议在练习时注意逻辑顺序和连接词的使用，使回答更加条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The passage informs students that there will be some radio station change for two reasons. This can attract more students to the community program and can encourage business place commercials on the program. The passage states that the university plans to make changes to the radio station for two reasons: to attract more students to the communication program and to encourage businesses to place commercials on the station.（将“community program”改为“communication program”，因为原文中提到的是communication program。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

In the conversation, the old man totally agree with such a stance. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with this proposal.（将“old man”改为“man”，因为原文中并未提到这个人是老年人。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

The first one is that it can benefit the students. If the radio station is for the nearby towns, there will be more programs and the students will have valuable job experience to serve the large audience. The first reason is that it can benefit students. If the radio station expands its range to nearby towns, there will be more programs, providing students with valuable job experience as they serve a larger audience.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

She also believes that it will gain revenue for the university. The university of her friend did this five years ago and earned a lot of money, so it can offer more scholarship and fund more projects. She also believes that it will generate revenue for the university. Her friend's university implemented a similar plan five years ago and made a lot of money, allowing them to offer more scholarships and fund additional projects.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

It is overall beneficial. Overall, it is beneficial.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The passage states that the university plans to make changes to the radio station for two reasons: to attract more students to the communication program and to encourage businesses to place commercials on the station. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with this proposal. The first reason is that it can benefit students. If the radio station expands its range to nearby towns, there will be more programs, providing students with valuable job experience as they serve a larger audience. She also believes that it will generate revenue for the university. Her friend's university implemented a similar plan five years ago and made a lot of money, allowing them to offer more scholarships and fund additional projects. Overall, it is beneficial.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Attract more students to the communication program
  - Encourage businesses to place commercials

- Conversation
  - Man agrees with the proposal
  - Benefits for students
    - Expanded range to nearby towns
    - More programs
    - Valuable job experience
  - Generating revenue for the university
    - Friend's university example
      - Implemented similar plan
      - Made a lot of money
      - Offered more scholarships and funded additional projects

- Overall beneficial

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的发言基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议同学注意掌握连贯的语速和适当的停顿。同时，注意准确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在一些地方可以进一步加强。例如，在提到扩大广播范围对学生的好处时，可以更具体地说明这将如何帮助他们获得实际工作经验。此外，在提到Tony的例子时，可以更详细地描述他们学校实施这个计划后取得的具体成果。总之，为了更好地支持观点，请尝试提供更多具体的例子和详细信息。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman wholeheartedly concurred with the idea that to make some changes to the college radio station. She thinks it will work very well. First, she thinks now the school's radio stations have a relatively limited range, only have several programs for the campus students. And if we expand the range, it can have more professional experience for the students to help them in real-life audience. Secondly, one of his friend, Tony, his school have done this five years ago. And finally, they earn a lot of money and repair some of his school's facilities.

Corrected Answer: The woman wholeheartedly concurred agreed ("concurred"较为正式，用"agreed"更自然) with the idea that to of making some changes to the college radio station. She thinks it will work very well. First, she thinks now currently ("currently"更自然地表示现在的情况) the school's radio stations have a relatively limited range, only have offering just a few programs for the campus students. And if we expand the range, it can have provide more professional experience for the students to help them in real-life audience engaging with real-life audiences. Secondly, one of his friend, her friends, Tony, his school have done said his school implemented this five years ago. And finally, they earn earned a lot of money and repair used it to renovate some of his school's facilities the school's facilities.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman wholeheartedly agreed with the idea of making changes to the college radio station, believing it would be highly effective. Firstly, she thinks that currently, the school's radio stations have a limited range, offering just a few programs for campus students. By expanding the range, it can provide students with more professional experience in engaging with real-life audiences. Secondly, she mentioned her friend Tony, who said his school implemented a similar plan five years ago. As a result, they earned a significant amount of money from commercials and used it to renovate the school's facilities. This example supports her belief that the proposed changes will achieve the university's goals by attracting more students to the communication program and generating additional revenue for the institution.

6.思维导图

- Agreement
  - Changes to college radio station
  - Effectiveness

- Limited range
  - Few programs for campus students
  - Expanding range benefits
    - Professional experience
    - Engaging with real-life audiences

- Friend's example (Tony)
  - Implemented similar plan
  - Earned money from commercials
  - Renovated school facilities

- Achieving university's goals
  - Attracting more students to communication program
  - Generating additional revenue

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及尝试纠正发音错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，并在回答中明确地阐述了女士为什么支持大学的提案。然而，可以通过增加更多细节和例子来进一步支持观点。例如，可以详细描述扩大广播范围将如何吸引更多学生申请传播专业，以及如何为大学带来额外收入。

5.语言使用

Original: The woman claims that she thinks the university's proposal is very effective. The reasons for this are she believes that expansion of the broadcasts can increase the amount of programs and also giving the presenters a much more professional experience and also receiving real-life audience not limited in only the campus and this will also develop the opportunity of the presenter's future career finding for example being a broadcaster. The woman give an example of his old friend which five years ago they have a success on same kind of program and get a lot of money on it.

Corrected: The woman claims states (“claims”表示“声称”，在这里用“states”更自然) that she thinks the university's proposal is very effective. The reasons for this are she believes that expansion the expansion (加定冠词使句子更完整) of the broadcasts can increase the amount number (“数量”用“number”更合适) of programs and also giving the presenters a much more professional experience and also receiving real-life audience not limited in only the campus and this will also develop the opportunity of the presenter's future career finding for example being a broadcaster. The woman give gives (动词应与主语一致，使用第三人称单数形式) an example of his her (应使用女性代词“her”) old friend which five years ago they have a success on same kind of program and get a lot of money on it.

Revised (140 words):

The woman states that she thinks the university's proposal is very effective. She believes that the expansion of the broadcasts can increase the number of programs, providing presenters with a more professional experience and exposing them to a real-life audience not limited to just the campus. This will also enhance the presenters' future career opportunities, such as becoming broadcasters. The woman gives an example of her old friend whose university implemented a similar program five years ago. That program turned out to be successful, generating a significant amount of revenue through commercials. This additional income was then used to offer more scholarships and fund projects for renovating facilities in other programs, ultimately benefiting the entire university community.

6.思维导图

• University's proposal
  • Expansion of broadcasts
    • Increase number of programs
    • Professional experience for presenters
    • Real-life audience
  • Enhanced career opportunities
  • Example of a successful program
    • Revenue from commercials
    • Scholarships and facility renovations

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者在练习时注意减少不必要的停顿，并确保发音准确。此外，注意在适当的地方使用标点符号。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. The speaker could have elaborated more on the benefits of the proposal, such as how the expanded radio programs would attract more students to the communication program and how the increased revenue from commercials would benefit the university as a whole. Additionally, incorporating more details from the listening passage, such as the success story of Tony's university, would have strengthened the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The article proposed expanding radio programs to nearby towns, stating that it will attract more students and provide the university extra revenue. The article proposes expanding the radio programs to nearby towns, stating that it would attract more students and provide the university with additional revenue.（将过去时改为现在时，将"will"改为"would"，将"extra"改为"additional"，在"university"和"revenue"之间加上"with"。）

However, in the conversation, the woman supports the proposal. In the conversation, however, the woman supports the proposal.（将“however”移到句子开头。）

Firstly, there are few programs now, and according to the proposal, it will expand programs which give students more experience and let them have better jobs after they graduate. Firstly, there are only a few programs currently, and according to the proposal, it would expand these programs, providing students with more experience and better job opportunities after graduation.（将“few”改为“only a few”，将“will”改为“would”，使用更自然的表达方式描述学生获得更多经验和毕业后的工作机会。）

Secondly, the school can get a lot of money from the commercial and use it as scholarship and facilities, which will make a better place. Secondly, the school could generate significant revenue from commercials and use it for scholarships and facility improvements, creating a better learning environment.（使用更自然的表达方式描述学校从广告中获得收入，并将其用于奖学金和设施改善。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The article proposes expanding the radio programs to nearby towns, stating that it would attract more students and provide the university with additional revenue. In the conversation, however, the woman supports the proposal. Firstly, there are only a few programs currently, and according to the proposal, it would expand these programs, providing students with more experience and better job opportunities after graduation. Secondly, the school could generate significant revenue from commercials and use it for scholarships and facility improvements, creating a better learning environment. By addressing these points and incorporating more details from the listening passage, such as the success story of Tony's university, the speaker can achieve a higher score in topic development and language use, ultimately reaching a score of 30.

6.思维导图

• Introduction

  • Article: Expanding radio programs
  • Conversation: Woman supports proposal

• Point 1: Benefits for students

  • Few programs currently
  • Expanded programs provide more experience
  • Better job opportunities after graduation

• Point 2: Benefits for the university

  • Generate significant revenue from commercials
  • Use revenue for scholarships and facility improvements
  • Create a better learning environment

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中，发言者的语速较为稳定，但偶尔出现停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性，请注意在适当的地方加入逗号和句号，以便更好地组织语言。同时，请注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在回答中提供了一个相对连贯和有组织的回应，并对大学的目标给出了合理的解释。然而，可以尝试更详细地解释这些观点，并提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。例如，在谈到扩大广播范围对学生的好处时，可以进一步讨论这将如何提高他们的专业技能和就业机会。

5.语言使用

Original: In the latter, In the reading passage, the university plans to undergo two major changes for two main reasons. First, they want to expand the range of the university radio stations so that they could attract more students. Second, the university plans to attract more revenue so that they can facilitate students and the university. In the conversation, the woman agreed with this proposal for two reasons. First, she thinks if the university expands the range, they will have a larger audience, so it will benefit those students who are majoring in communication. They will find a better job after graduation.

(在原文中，应使用“阅读部分”而不是“后者”。)

Revised (140 words):

In the reading passage, the university proposes two major changes for its radio station to achieve two main goals. Firstly, they aim to expand the broadcasting range of the radio station to attract more students to their communication program. Secondly, they plan to generate additional revenue by increasing listenership and attracting businesses for commercials. The woman in the conversation supports this proposal for two reasons. She believes that by expanding the broadcasting range, a larger audience will be reached, benefiting communication students by providing them with professional experience and better job opportunities after graduation. Furthermore, she cites her friend Tony's experience at another university where a similar expansion led to increased revenue from commercials, which was then used to offer scholarships and fund facility renovations for other programs.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Two major changes
    • Expand broadcasting range
    • Generate additional revenue

• Conversation

  • Woman's support
    • Larger audience benefits communication students
      • Professional experience
      • Better job opportunities
    • Increased revenue from commercials
      • Offer scholarships
      • Fund facility renovations

7.关键词