TOEFL Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain how the professor's experience in the cafe illustrate the concept of sweeping generalization.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方还有一些不必要的停顿。建议同学在练习口语时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方还可以进一步加强对观点和例子的支持。建议同学在练习时注意在回答中加入更多具体的细节和例子，以便更好地支持自己的观点。同时，注意在回答中明确表达出教授的经历如何说明了“一刀切”的概念。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the lecture, the professor uses one of his own personal experiences to illustrate the concept of sweeping generalization. The professor said that shouting was very rude in the public and nobody liked it. One day, in the cafe shop, he put his bag on the table and all his things were in his bag, just like his keys, his papers, and so on. And many people were at the shop at that time. However, after a while, his bag was missing. The woman was next to his bag. She saw his bag missing, but she didn't shout because no one shouted in the cafe shop.

Corrected Answer: In the lecture, the professor uses one of his own personal experiences to illustrate the concept of sweeping generalization. The professor mentioned that shouting is considered very rude in public and nobody likes it. One day, at a café, he placed his bag on the table with all his belongings inside, such as keys, papers, and so on. Many people were present at that time. However, after a while, he realized that he had left his bag behind. A woman sitting next to him noticed it too but didn't shout because no one usually shouts in a café. (将部分表述进行了修改，使其更自然流畅。同时，修正了一些语法错误。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the lecture, the professor uses one of his own personal experiences to illustrate the concept of sweeping generalization. The professor mentioned that shouting is considered very rude in public and nobody likes it. One day, at a crowded café, he placed his bag on the table with all his essential belongings inside, including keys, papers, and so on. Many people were present at that time. However, after leaving the café, he realized that he had left his bag behind. He rushed back and found his bag still at the table. A woman sitting next to him noticed it too but didn't shout to get his attention because she didn't want to disturb others, as no one usually shouts in a café. This situation demonstrates how applying a general rule, like not shouting in public, can lead to exceptions and exemplifies the concept of sweeping generalization.

6.思维导图

- Sweeping Generalization
    - Professor's experience
        - Shouting in public
            - Considered rude
            - Nobody likes it
        - Café situation
            - Left bag behind
            - Woman noticed but didn't shout
        - Exceptions to general rules
            - Not shouting in public

7.关键词