TOEFL Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain how the example from the professor's lecture illustrates the concept of magnetoreception.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 语言使用：3.5

• 主题发展：3.5

2.预估分数

• 26

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大致清晰和流畅，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议练习更自然的语调和节奏，以便在讲话时减少停顿。同时，请注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，能够清楚地阐述教授讲座中关于盲鼹鼠的例子如何说明磁感应的概念。然而，可以尝试更深入地讨论磁感应在盲鼹鼠导航中的作用，以及这种现象在其他动物中的应用。在回答中提供更多详细信息和例子将使内容更丰富。

5.语言使用

原文：According to the professor, blind morat is a kind of animal that spend their whole life underground in tunnels and chambers. According to the professor, the blind mole rat is a type of animal that spends its entire life underground in tunnels and chambers.（将"blind morat"改为"blind mole rat"，将"spend"改为"spends"，将"whole life"改为"entire life"，将"a kind of animal"改为"a type of animal"。这些更正使句子更符合语法规则和词汇用法。）

Their activity area is extensive, however, there is no light. Their habitat is vast; however, there is no light.（将"Their activity area"改为"Their habitat"，将"is extensive,"改为"is vast;"。这些修正使句子更自然且表达更准确。）

Therefore, it is impossible for them to rely on sun or stars or other landmarks to guide themselves. Therefore, they cannot rely on the sun, stars, or other landmarks for navigation.（将原句子进行了简化和重组，使其更自然和流畅。）

Also, as they cannot see clearly, they have to rely on a crystal structure near their nose, which serves as a pole to guide themselves. Additionally, since they are unable to see clearly, they must rely on a crystal-like structure near their nose that functions as a compass for guidance.（将"Also"改为"Additionally"，将"crystal structure"改为"crystal-like structure"，将"serves as a pole"改为"functions as a compass"。这些修正使句子更自然且表达更准确。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the professor, the blind mole rat is a type of animal that spends its entire life underground in tunnels and chambers. Their habitat is vast; however, there is no light. Therefore, they cannot rely on the sun, stars, or other landmarks for navigation. Additionally, since they are unable to see clearly, they must rely on a crystal-like structure near their nose that functions as a compass for guidance. With this structure, they can know which way to go and also know the direction from which they travel. This example from the professor's lecture effectively illustrates the concept of magnetoreception, as it demonstrates how the blind mole rat uses its unique physical features to navigate through its dark and complex environment without relying on traditional landmarks.

6.思维导图

• Magnetoreception
  • Blind mole rat
    • Underground tunnels and chambers
    • No light
    • Crystal-like structure near nose
      • Functions as a compass
      • Navigating without traditional landmarks

7.关键词