TOEFL TPO -1 Academic Discussion Writing Sample: Doctor Diaz:
What should children be learning in school? Many people believe that time in the
classroom should be spent acquiring foundational knowledge in subjects like math,
reading, science, and history. Others feel that it's important for a child's creativity to
be nurtured, and thus the school curriculum must include classes in art and music.
There's so much to learn, yet so little time in school to learn it all! What do you think
should be included in the curriculum? Why?
Claire
I agree that traditional subjects like math, science, and reading are important. but so
are classes in art and music. Engaging with art and music can help children be more
creative and can stimulate their imaginations. That in turn facilitates critical thinking,
which is essential in any curriculum, so l am in favor of including art and music in the
school day.
Paul
Sure, drawing pictures and listening to music is fun, but children can do that on their
own time. The school day is too short as it is. and there is so much foundational
knowledge in math, reading, science, and history that children need to learn: it is
better to spend classroom time on that foundational knowledge and let kids explore
art and music at home. • LingoLeap